Comment from Mary Vigasin

Excellent

Well done poem with an easy flow giving good advise and encouraging others.
I enjoyed this read and food for thought.
Very good Patricia
It would have been
A good contest submission
Regards
Mary

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021

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Comment from judiverse

Excellent

This flows together very smoothly and you give an excellent accounting of what a destructive force pride can be. We certainly don't have all the answers in life, and we should remember that and not act as if we do. So true, Pride goeth before destruction and a haughty spirit before a fall. judi

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021

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Comment from Vanna1

Excellent

Great idea to spread that we should encourage others. Good presentation as well. Yes, bullying is a huge problem today even amoung powerful people right down to school kids.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021

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Comment from Jasmine Girl

Excellent

I like your Acrostic poem about pride and the framed painting.
I agree with you in the following line and it's so well said:
Pride goeth before destruction

Well done.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021

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Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written Acrostic about pride. To be proud in a certain extents is necessary for us to keep our standards high, but when it becomes too much where we look down on others we will certainly fall.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2021

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Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

I just love this stanza, our temptation in a nut-shell; "Pride goes before destruction
Requiring us to take note to our attitudes
In how we deal with others so we
Don't think we have all the answers to life and we can
Encourage others to be the best they can be." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021

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Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Excellent acrostic poem, Patricia. A little bit of kindness is a good thing, and a whole lot kindness is great.

As always a beautiful presentation to accompany your sage advice. :))

Gloria

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021

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Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Certainly there are many in power who are indeed prideful and bully others. May the Lord protect us from such people. Great message in your acrostic poem!

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021

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Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

I know we should not have pride and a humble spirit is of great price. I do, however, think you should be very proud of the artwork that you have created... not a selfish pride, but in a job well done and it is so beautiful. Love it, Patricia!!

Melissa

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021

Thank you for the review. I am not speaking of the pride we have in our accomplishments, but the pride that comes from those who present themselves as better than others.

Comment from BrooklynnPreston

Excellent

This is a very pretty poem. You describe the meaning of 'Pride' so well. "In how we deal with others so we don't think we have all the answers to life" This is very true though it is very hard to put down our own pride and accept this. Well done describing that so well. As always I love your work and I wish you luck in the future. God Bless.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021

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