Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

An engaging story. One can see the signs but 'love' remains blind to the reality. Probably more common than one would think. Well written. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2021

Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan

Excellent

A very well written thought-provoking stories as to how many families are falling apart. An early sign of getting lost is the fear of the unknown. One has to face the circumstances in the face and try to resolve the problems. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2021

Comment from MissMerri

Excellent

This was written in a very readable style. The list article is very popular I have heard. My only problem with your list is that sign number five seems to be missing. Did you simply mis-number the reasons or are we missing part of your story? It is well written and clear. I enjoyed reading this. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2021

Comment from Alli Johnston

Excellent

I am the daughter of a parent who was married 5 times. What a childhood! It seemed to always work out this way as she always attracted the broken ones who needed fixing (that only a therapist could do!).

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2021

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Being a slave to someone else's whims and commands is no fun and there should be give and take in all households but I know this does not happen. I just have one suggestion for you here, for the sake of grammar:

"I should've (opened) my eyes better and (looked) closely at the signs!"

Love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 07-Jan-2021