Not Happy
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Comment from harmony13
The author's words are true, interesting and creative. Thank you for the
author's notes. This poem made me ponder on when I lived in New York
and woke up to snowy morning and had to drive 40 minutes to work!
The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is prefect!
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
The author's words are true, interesting and creative. Thank you for the
author's notes. This poem made me ponder on when I lived in New York
and woke up to snowy morning and had to drive 40 minutes to work!
The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is prefect!
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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Thanks for such a thorough and positive review.
dragonpoet
Comment from AnnaLinda
Dragonpoet,
This is a clever little entry for the club! Your title had me fooled.
I like how you were able to have three end rhymes while keeping
nice imagery and message. It can't be long now, right?
Very nice presentation as well,
Anna
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
Dragonpoet,
This is a clever little entry for the club! Your title had me fooled.
I like how you were able to have three end rhymes while keeping
nice imagery and message. It can't be long now, right?
Very nice presentation as well,
Anna
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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Thanks for the kudos. I am glad you thought the mono-rhyme worked well.
Joan
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Yes, I did Joan!
Comment from lyenochka
Yes, not many people enjoy the cold of winter. Even if they could afford the warmth of fur, everyone would prefer the warmth of spring. Nice rhyming three lined poem.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
Yes, not many people enjoy the cold of winter. Even if they could afford the warmth of fur, everyone would prefer the warmth of spring. Nice rhyming three lined poem.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
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Thanks for reading and review my poem. I appreciate all the stars.
Joan
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Not Happy', is short succinct and delightfully descriptive. Woven through each short line are the golden threads of truth. With a minimum of words this talented poet has told it as it is. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
'Not Happy', is short succinct and delightfully descriptive. Woven through each short line are the golden threads of truth. With a minimum of words this talented poet has told it as it is. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your nice comments on my poem. I appreciate all the stars.
Joan
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Joan you certainly earned them.
God bless and stay safe!
the Duchess
Comment from Mary Vigasin
This is clever and creative. Even wrapped in fur in the dead of winter, one is not happy and only Spring can cure.
I enjoyed this read.
Well done.
Regards,
Mary
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
This is clever and creative. Even wrapped in fur in the dead of winter, one is not happy and only Spring can cure.
I enjoyed this read.
Well done.
Regards,
Mary
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
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Thanks for taking the time to read and review, Mary. Both are much appreciated
Joan
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is Awesome writing. I like this one. Not many people purr while wrapped in winter fur. For which spring is only cure.well done. Great photo as well. ð???
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
This is Awesome writing. I like this one. Not many people purr while wrapped in winter fur. For which spring is only cure.well done. Great photo as well. ð???
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
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Thank you for the nice review and generous rating.
Joan
Comment from Boogienights
Very cute, true also I might add. Maybe cats are ok with it, but winter will never make me purr. I can't wait for spring, it's getting close now. Thanks so much for sharing. :)
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
Very cute, true also I might add. Maybe cats are ok with it, but winter will never make me purr. I can't wait for spring, it's getting close now. Thanks so much for sharing. :)
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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Thanks for the review. I agree with you about winter.
dp
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We are coming to the end of winter now and can see spring on the horizon! You brought the chill of winter here as we wrap up warm and pray for spring, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
We are coming to the end of winter now and can see spring on the horizon! You brought the chill of winter here as we wrap up warm and pray for spring, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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Thanks for you kind comments and high rating, Dolly.
Joan
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Not many people purr
While wrapped in winter fur
For which Spring is only cure - so cute bye, bye winter , welcome back Spring. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
Not many people purr
While wrapped in winter fur
For which Spring is only cure - so cute bye, bye winter , welcome back Spring. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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Thanks for the nice review and the good luck wishes.
dp
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This poem speaks a few people in winter do not purr in fur only spring gives or brings in them cure as they look forward to spring not too far; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
This poem speaks a few people in winter do not purr in fur only spring gives or brings in them cure as they look forward to spring not too far; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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Thanks for taking the time to read and review my poem
Joan