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Not Happy

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17 total reviews 
Comment from harmony13
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The author's words are true, interesting and creative. Thank you for the
author's notes. This poem made me ponder on when I lived in New York
and woke up to snowy morning and had to drive 40 minutes to work!
The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is prefect!

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
    Thanks for such a thorough and positive review.
    dragonpoet
Comment from AnnaLinda
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Dragonpoet,

This is a clever little entry for the club! Your title had me fooled.
I like how you were able to have three end rhymes while keeping
nice imagery and message. It can't be long now, right?

Very nice presentation as well,
Anna

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
    Thanks for the kudos. I am glad you thought the mono-rhyme worked well.
    Joan
reply by AnnaLinda on 21-Feb-2021
    Yes, I did Joan!
Comment from lyenochka
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Yes, not many people enjoy the cold of winter. Even if they could afford the warmth of fur, everyone would prefer the warmth of spring. Nice rhyming three lined poem.

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
    Thanks for reading and review my poem. I appreciate all the stars.
    Joan
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
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'Not Happy', is short succinct and delightfully descriptive. Woven through each short line are the golden threads of truth. With a minimum of words this talented poet has told it as it is. I look forward to seeing your next post.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
    Thank you for your nice comments on my poem. I appreciate all the stars.
    Joan
reply by duchessofdrumborg on 20-Feb-2021
    Joan you certainly earned them.
    God bless and stay safe!
    the Duchess
Comment from Mary Vigasin
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This is clever and creative. Even wrapped in fur in the dead of winter, one is not happy and only Spring can cure.
I enjoyed this read.
Well done.
Regards,
Mary

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
    Thanks for taking the time to read and review, Mary. Both are much appreciated
    Joan
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
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This is Awesome writing. I like this one. Not many people purr while wrapped in winter fur. For which spring is only cure.well done. Great photo as well. ð???

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
    Thank you for the nice review and generous rating.
    Joan
Comment from Boogienights
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Very cute, true also I might add. Maybe cats are ok with it, but winter will never make me purr. I can't wait for spring, it's getting close now. Thanks so much for sharing. :)

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
    Thanks for the review. I agree with you about winter.
    dp
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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We are coming to the end of winter now and can see spring on the horizon! You brought the chill of winter here as we wrap up warm and pray for spring, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
    Thanks for you kind comments and high rating, Dolly.
    Joan
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Not many people purr
While wrapped in winter fur
For which Spring is only cure - so cute bye, bye winter , welcome back Spring. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
    Thanks for the nice review and the good luck wishes.
    dp
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This poem speaks a few people in winter do not purr in fur only spring gives or brings in them cure as they look forward to spring not too far; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
    Thanks for taking the time to read and review my poem
    Joan