No Place Like Home
5-7-5 form67 total reviews
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
Amen!
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem,they are a perfect match.
You captured my attention not only the beautiful picture But your words touched my heart and soul
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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Amen!
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem,they are a perfect match.
You captured my attention not only the beautiful picture But your words touched my heart and soul
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 06-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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Hi Cookie, I so sorry for my late reply...Thank you for a wonderful review...I love the picture as well...God Bless...and you are so welcome....love you...Linda xxoo
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Your very welcome, take care
Cookie
Comment from padumachitta
Hello
A good entry for the 5 7 5 poem contest.
It meets the requirement and has a clear message. It is clever and shows your belief system.
may you stay safe
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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Hello
A good entry for the 5 7 5 poem contest.
It meets the requirement and has a clear message. It is clever and shows your belief system.
may you stay safe
Comment Written 06-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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Hi Padu, Thank you my sweet friend for a wonderful review...God Bless...and you stay safe as well...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about our eternal home that is kept in perfect condition by God Himself and our mortgage is paid when we enter the pearly gates.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about our eternal home that is kept in perfect condition by God Himself and our mortgage is paid when we enter the pearly gates.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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Hi Sandra, so sorry to reply so late...
Thank you for a wonderful review my sweet friend...
I told others...this will be the only mortgage I will
have ever paid off...almost on the one I have now...LOL...
thank you sweet girl...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from Goodadvicechan
I like the picture. It matches the title "No place like him."
Just a few words like "The Almighty God holds my eternal mortgage
paid, when entering..." are moving... The feeling of "Mortgage paid." is unbelievable.
Happy 2021
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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I like the picture. It matches the title "No place like him."
Just a few words like "The Almighty God holds my eternal mortgage
paid, when entering..." are moving... The feeling of "Mortgage paid." is unbelievable.
Happy 2021
Comment Written 06-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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Hi Goodad, this will be the only mortgage I would've paid in full...LOL...Thank you for a wonderful review my friend...God Bless...love Linda xxoo
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Happy for u...
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smiling big...xxoo
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Linda, this is lovely - a perfect 5/7/5 written true to form and I like the message very much - great use of metaphor. Beautiful picture. Well done and HAPPY NEW YEAR to you and yours. Take care - warm regards Dorothy xx
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
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Hello Linda, this is lovely - a perfect 5/7/5 written true to form and I like the message very much - great use of metaphor. Beautiful picture. Well done and HAPPY NEW YEAR to you and yours. Take care - warm regards Dorothy xx
Comment Written 06-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
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Hi Dorothy, Thank you my sweet friend for a wonderful review...
I'm so glad you like it...I hope you and your family had a Blessed Christmas day...And a happy new year...God Bless...and you take care as well...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from Begin Again
Beautiful, serene artwork. Don't we all hold this thought dear to our heart; our final home in Heaven. Enjoyed your poem. It was a nice place to start my morning. Smiles to you!
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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Beautiful, serene artwork. Don't we all hold this thought dear to our heart; our final home in Heaven. Enjoyed your poem. It was a nice place to start my morning. Smiles to you!
Comment Written 06-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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Hi, Thank you for a wonderful review...I am so sorry to be replying so late...this will be the only mortgage I have ever paid of...I'm so glad you enjoyed my poem...God Bless...and smiles back at you...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel
What a beautiful picture and beautiful poem describing how our "bill" i.e., mortgage, for sin has already been paid and we'll be able to move right into our heavenly home to enjoy eternity!
Thank you for writing and sharing.
Susan
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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What a beautiful picture and beautiful poem describing how our "bill" i.e., mortgage, for sin has already been paid and we'll be able to move right into our heavenly home to enjoy eternity!
Thank you for writing and sharing.
Susan
Comment Written 06-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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Hi Susan, exactly sweet girl...Thank you for a wonderful review
my sweet friend...this will be the only mortgage I have ever paid off...LOL...thank you...and you are so welcome...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Brilliant! Linda, I could never have written this, it's just perfect! I never have a six when you post! The syllable count is spot on, and the message you give us is just amazing. Well done, my clever friend. Good luck in the contest. Lots of love and hugs. :)) Sandra xxxxxx
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
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Brilliant! Linda, I could never have written this, it's just perfect! I never have a six when you post! The syllable count is spot on, and the message you give us is just amazing. Well done, my clever friend. Good luck in the contest. Lots of love and hugs. :)) Sandra xxxxxx
Comment Written 06-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
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Hi Sandra, as I have told a few...this is the only mortgage
I will have ever paid off...but I'm getting close with the one I'm in...or come to visit once in a while...
you are the only six I need to see hear...that's because your a ten...
Thank you for an awesome review my amazing friend...and for all your wonderful luck...love much...and biggest hugs...Linda xxoo
Comment from Wendy G
Wow, that's a beautiful thought, and also a lovely image. I hope your 5-7-5 does well in the contest, because it should. Says enough, not too much, but with its few words it encourages the reader to think of the meaning and the implications. Well written.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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Wow, that's a beautiful thought, and also a lovely image. I hope your 5-7-5 does well in the contest, because it should. Says enough, not too much, but with its few words it encourages the reader to think of the meaning and the implications. Well written.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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Hi Wendy, Thank you sweet girl for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...I'm so sorry for being so late to reply back my sweet friend...God Bless...love you...Linda xxoo
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Sending hugs to you too!
Comment from Barry Childs
Well, L. Raven, so much in so few words. A very descriptive and beautiful poem. I never liked having a mortgage, but this one is well worth having. Stay safe and well.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
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Well, L. Raven, so much in so few words. A very descriptive and beautiful poem. I never liked having a mortgage, but this one is well worth having. Stay safe and well.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
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Hi Barry, like I told a few...this will be only mortgage I will ever have paid off...LOL...Thank You for a wonderful review...God Bless...and you stay safe too...Love Linda xxoo
