No Place Like Home
5-7-5 form67 total reviews
Comment from mermaids
This is a great faith based poem, it warms the heart. Love the line "holds my eternal mortgage", it is a unique and creative way to express faith. Excellent use of words and you say much with the 5-7-5 form.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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This is a great faith based poem, it warms the heart. Love the line "holds my eternal mortgage", it is a unique and creative way to express faith. Excellent use of words and you say much with the 5-7-5 form.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Hi Elaine, Thank You my sweet friend for a wonderful review...it's the only mortgage I have ever had that was paid in full...LOL...thank You...God Bless...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from elainec4
Enjoyed your 5-7-5 contest entry. The content was thought-provoking and pertinent to many! Your artwork added to the work, extending your message. You did well within the limits of this form.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
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Enjoyed your 5-7-5 contest entry. The content was thought-provoking and pertinent to many! Your artwork added to the work, extending your message. You did well within the limits of this form.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
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Hi Elaine, thank you so much for a wonderful review...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Patricia Cammish
This is an effective 5 7 5 poem, well complemented by the illustration and colour palette.
Perhaps it would be good to have a comma after ' mortgage'.
Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
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This is an effective 5 7 5 poem, well complemented by the illustration and colour palette.
Perhaps it would be good to have a comma after ' mortgage'.
Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 06-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
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Hi Patricia, Thank you sweet girl for a wonderful review...
and for your help...and thank you fore your good luck...God Bless...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from Ulla
Hi Linda, that's a wonderful way of saying that you have full confidence where you will eventually end up. I'm very pleased for you. I'm more pragmatic, but, then again, I'm not religious. Good luck in the contest with this lovely 5-7-5 poem. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Hi Linda, that's a wonderful way of saying that you have full confidence where you will eventually end up. I'm very pleased for you. I'm more pragmatic, but, then again, I'm not religious. Good luck in the contest with this lovely 5-7-5 poem. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 06-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Hi Ulla, Thank You sweet girl for a wonderful review...
and for the good luck...smiling sooooo big back at you...
love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
5-7-5 form
No Place Like Home
by l.raven
Hello, Linda,
This is the second poem I read today about spiritual meaning. Yours is a great entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry Contest. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Love you,
Gypsy
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
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5-7-5 form
No Place Like Home
by l.raven
Hello, Linda,
This is the second poem I read today about spiritual meaning. Yours is a great entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry Contest. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Love you,
Gypsy
Comment Written 06-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
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Hi Gypsy, Thank you so much sweet girl for a wonderful review....
faith is so important now..always...and the you for the best of luck...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from Mastery
Hi, my dear friend, Linda. Happy New Year to you. I am so glad to see you post. It has been so long since your last, it seems. I think your 5-7-5 is absolutely beautiful and so inspiring for all. Bless you. Bob
(sorry no sixes left)
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
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Hi, my dear friend, Linda. Happy New Year to you. I am so glad to see you post. It has been so long since your last, it seems. I think your 5-7-5 is absolutely beautiful and so inspiring for all. Bless you. Bob
(sorry no sixes left)
Comment Written 06-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
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Hi Bob, you are more than enough to have than a six...
I'm still not on in full...but have been trying to come in a bit more...I hope you had a wonderful New Years Day...
Thank you for a wonderful review my sweet friend...God Bless...
and take care...love Linda xxoo
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X Bob
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your image is beautiful and perfect for your well-chosen words. Great job with the contest rules. Your syllables are correct per line. Your poem makes a great and true point about one's time on Earth before going to Heaven. Best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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Your image is beautiful and perfect for your well-chosen words. Great job with the contest rules. Your syllables are correct per line. Your poem makes a great and true point about one's time on Earth before going to Heaven. Best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 06-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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Hi Jan, Thank you for a wonderful review...I'm so glad you like it...and thank you for the best wishes...
I want to say I am so sorry for the loss of your brother...
my heart goes out to all his family and friends...I know the pain felt...I lost my younger brother in 2011...he was 56...
God be with you...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from greyson ernst
this is really good and you easily won my vote and that picture is really good and as always keep writing and stay safe
sincerely Greyson Ernst
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
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this is really good and you easily won my vote and that picture is really good and as always keep writing and stay safe
sincerely Greyson Ernst
Comment Written 06-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
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Hi Greyson, thank you so much sweet guy for a wonderful review...
love Linda xxoo
Comment from Anne Johnston
Very good use of words to describe the picture. Putting our faith in the Lord Jesus Christ, gives us the promise of a home in heaven when life here on earth is done. No mortgage, everything was paid in full on Calvary.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
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Very good use of words to describe the picture. Putting our faith in the Lord Jesus Christ, gives us the promise of a home in heaven when life here on earth is done. No mortgage, everything was paid in full on Calvary.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
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Hi Anne, Amen...Thank You for a wonderful review sweet girl...
love you...Linda xxoo
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You are welcome. Have a great day
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you have a great weekend...xxoo love
Comment from Susan Larson
What a beautiful metaphor for us as we relocate to our next home, price already paid by out living Savior. I imagined all my loved ones who have moved on embracing as depicted in the picture. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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What a beautiful metaphor for us as we relocate to our next home, price already paid by out living Savior. I imagined all my loved ones who have moved on embracing as depicted in the picture. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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Hi Susan, Thank you for a wonderful review sweet girl...and for the good luck...so sorry I replied so late my sweet friend...love you...Linda xxoo
