eyes opened to possibilities
Naani (stars and moon flood)2 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Round these parts, the presence of clouds in the dark sky makes it all the more darker... ;) An intriguing offering for the contest with a fun play on words there at the end... Best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Round these parts, the presence of clouds in the dark sky makes it all the more darker... ;) An intriguing offering for the contest with a fun play on words there at the end... Best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 07-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Yvette,
Pleased you recognized my connect with ?flood? and ?sees.? Always happy to insert a word play into my typical 5-7-5, which in this instance had to be expanded for the Naani format. Thanks too for your good wishes.
Comment from sammielwf
Mystery Poet,
I do not have much experience with writing a Naani poem. I have read the contest rules and "Eyes Open to Possibilities" seems to comply with all of them.
With that in mind, I want to express my enjoyment as I read your poem
I could absolutely visualize the message you created through your words...and the blue type color was enhanced by the photograph you selected. The colors of the photograph were a perfect background for the night time framing of the poem.
Good job.
Sammielwf
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Mystery Poet,
I do not have much experience with writing a Naani poem. I have read the contest rules and "Eyes Open to Possibilities" seems to comply with all of them.
With that in mind, I want to express my enjoyment as I read your poem
I could absolutely visualize the message you created through your words...and the blue type color was enhanced by the photograph you selected. The colors of the photograph were a perfect background for the night time framing of the poem.
Good job.
Sammielwf
Comment Written 07-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Thanks for your endorsement for my Naani post. It is a short poem style that I have limited experience in writing. So I am encouraged by your words. I am always pleased to use FanArtist Cleo for my artwork.
