Celebration on the Boulevard
Inspired by New Year lights58 total reviews
Comment from Poetic Friend
Great advice, Amada. Even in the most beautiful sceneries we must not become lax during this pandemic.
Oftentimes, I becomes tearful on beautiful days and nights knowing that the air might be tainted. Sad, so sad.
Thank you for sharing your lovely poem, dear.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
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Great advice, Amada. Even in the most beautiful sceneries we must not become lax during this pandemic.
Oftentimes, I becomes tearful on beautiful days and nights knowing that the air might be tainted. Sad, so sad.
Thank you for sharing your lovely poem, dear.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your warm copmments. Lovely to read.
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Amada,
I love this short poem--it says so much in just a few words. I just to love fireworks, but now the noise is a little too much for my PTSD.
You write so well, Amada, and you've really come a long way in just a few months.
Congratulations on the All Time Best badge.
Blessings,
Have a good weekend,
Cindy
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
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Amada,
I love this short poem--it says so much in just a few words. I just to love fireworks, but now the noise is a little too much for my PTSD.
You write so well, Amada, and you've really come a long way in just a few months.
Congratulations on the All Time Best badge.
Blessings,
Have a good weekend,
Cindy
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
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Yes, Cindy, I had a nice weekend...watching old movies, raining, raining.
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😊
Comment from Janet Foor
Excellent and timely Lune poem. A commentary on our times. Striking picture to draw attention to the hopeful healing light.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
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Excellent and timely Lune poem. A commentary on our times. Striking picture to draw attention to the hopeful healing light.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 07-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
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Thank you janet.
Comment from victor 66
To some degree, I Envy you, I have an interest in blinking neon lights. But for me, I have a hard time being around strangers. But I would definitely enjoy the neon blinking lights. As for the people on respirators, we can only hope the best for them. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
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To some degree, I Envy you, I have an interest in blinking neon lights. But for me, I have a hard time being around strangers. But I would definitely enjoy the neon blinking lights. As for the people on respirators, we can only hope the best for them. Best wishes.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your words,Victor.
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You are most welcome, Amada.
Comment from dragonpoet
This use the pandemic mask as a metaphor for the fact people couldn't see the faces of the people who were watching the fireworks or maybe that no one had fireworks displays for New Year's Day.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dp
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
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This use the pandemic mask as a metaphor for the fact people couldn't see the faces of the people who were watching the fireworks or maybe that no one had fireworks displays for New Year's Day.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dp
Comment Written 07-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
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Your comments read like a poem to me. Thank you, dragonpoetg.
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You're welcome, amada.
dp
Comment from elainec4
Both your words and your artwork paint a clear and pertinent picture at this time of year. I love the image of the boulevard wearing a mask tonight, hiding the reality of day.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
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Both your words and your artwork paint a clear and pertinent picture at this time of year. I love the image of the boulevard wearing a mask tonight, hiding the reality of day.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for reading into my work.
Comment from Mastery
Hi my friend. This is a brilliant Lune and should be considered for Poem of the month in my view. It is clever and very much well-timed because of our pandemic situation.
"boulevard
wears a mask, tonight."
Masks will be a way of life forever, I am thinking. Bob
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Hi my friend. This is a brilliant Lune and should be considered for Poem of the month in my view. It is clever and very much well-timed because of our pandemic situation.
"boulevard
wears a mask, tonight."
Masks will be a way of life forever, I am thinking. Bob
Comment Written 07-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Hi Bob, dear friend...I am hnored. our insight means so much to me.
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"our insight?" Bob
Comment from Monica Chaddick
Congratulations on your work being recognized and on its being named one of the all time best. This is a touching poem, very descriptive in its simplicity. I liked the tie in with wearing the mask. Best of luck in all of your future writing endeavors.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Congratulations on your work being recognized and on its being named one of the all time best. This is a touching poem, very descriptive in its simplicity. I liked the tie in with wearing the mask. Best of luck in all of your future writing endeavors.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much, Monica, your comments are so uplifting.
Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel
I agree with the sentiments you expressed in your notes! I also wish for them a healing light. You said much in this short poem, and the artwork is perfect. I love the idea of the neon lights wearing a mask - the fireworks overcoming even their own brightness!
Thank you for sharing.
Susan
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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I agree with the sentiments you expressed in your notes! I also wish for them a healing light. You said much in this short poem, and the artwork is perfect. I love the idea of the neon lights wearing a mask - the fireworks overcoming even their own brightness!
Thank you for sharing.
Susan
Comment Written 07-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Hi Susan Louise, thank you for thinking well of this lune poem.
Comment from Pantygynt
A very powerful thirteen syllables indeed and rendered even more so by events in Washington currently widely reported. To get the horns of your moon to rhyme makes it exceptional
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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A very powerful thirteen syllables indeed and rendered even more so by events in Washington currently widely reported. To get the horns of your moon to rhyme makes it exceptional
Comment Written 07-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much, Pantygynt.
