Promises to Keep
Grandfather reminisces about a kiss12 total reviews
Comment from RetroStarfish
GREAT story. Well told in just 100 well chosen and well placed words.
"Katie, my blue-eyed, honey-haired sister, had driven down to Fort Bragg to see me off..."
This is a super entry in the contest. Good luck.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021
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GREAT story. Well told in just 100 well chosen and well placed words.
"Katie, my blue-eyed, honey-haired sister, had driven down to Fort Bragg to see me off..."
This is a super entry in the contest. Good luck.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for the great review and encouraging remarks.
Comment from Bill Schott
This one-hundred-word story, Promises to Keep, has the proper word count and finds the stranger's kiss in this apt story of these off-to-war soldiers and the encouraging sibling.
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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021
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This one-hundred-word story, Promises to Keep, has the proper word count and finds the stranger's kiss in this apt story of these off-to-war soldiers and the encouraging sibling.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021
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Thank you very much, Bill, for sharing my story.
