Doctor's Interference
100 words10 total reviews
Comment from Goodadvicechan
The author is good in writing this piece. I find it somewhat unbelievable that the kiss happened but it happened. It might be natural. A kiss is sometimes uncontrollable...
Good work. Happy writing and Happy New Year
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The author is good in writing this piece. I find it somewhat unbelievable that the kiss happened but it happened. It might be natural. A kiss is sometimes uncontrollable...
Good work. Happy writing and Happy New Year
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello anonymous
Great entry for the 100 Word Dash writing prompt contest.
I really like your flash fiction story about pet love. It was a funny ending.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
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Hello anonymous
Great entry for the 100 Word Dash writing prompt contest.
I really like your flash fiction story about pet love. It was a funny ending.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written hundred word dash about the first kiss between two strangers at the vets consulting rooms between two dogs who will find each other to continue with their romance.
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A very well-written hundred word dash about the first kiss between two strangers at the vets consulting rooms between two dogs who will find each other to continue with their romance.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
Comment from Wendy G
I like the originality and freshness of this story (and I do like dog stories!). Your story was well thought through, and just a little shocking until we realised that it was a doggy kiss. Well done!
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I like the originality and freshness of this story (and I do like dog stories!). Your story was well thought through, and just a little shocking until we realised that it was a doggy kiss. Well done!
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
Comment from LisaMay
This is really good! I checked all the stories to see what topics the writers had chosen for the kiss scenario as I was thinking of entering myself. I had in mind to write about a dog but now i won't because you have done it so well. I will vote for your story when it comes up. I think your story shows the most originality and is well told.
Correction: the full stop needs to be placed correctly at the end of the 4th paragraph (after up.)
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This is really good! I checked all the stories to see what topics the writers had chosen for the kiss scenario as I was thinking of entering myself. I had in mind to write about a dog but now i won't because you have done it so well. I will vote for your story when it comes up. I think your story shows the most originality and is well told.
Correction: the full stop needs to be placed correctly at the end of the 4th paragraph (after up.)
Comment Written 03-Jan-2021
Comment from Iza Deleanu
A very cute little story, meeting at the Vet I presume with happy kissing and a promise for a second kiss for another time. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.
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A very cute little story, meeting at the Vet I presume with happy kissing and a promise for a second kiss for another time. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2021
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Delightful--an original for sure--may be a winner--I didn't see that coming! You set it up perfectly--I did a double-take--first I thought that the lady was human. Clever!
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Delightful--an original for sure--may be a winner--I didn't see that coming! You set it up perfectly--I did a double-take--first I thought that the lady was human. Clever!
Comment Written 03-Jan-2021
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
You are the first person I've read that used pups/dogs in this
first kiss contest. I was getting a little concerned when "his
tongue met her cheek." I like your take on this contest. Good
luck.
Rdfrdmom2
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You are the first person I've read that used pups/dogs in this
first kiss contest. I was getting a little concerned when "his
tongue met her cheek." I like your take on this contest. Good
luck.
Rdfrdmom2
Comment Written 03-Jan-2021
Comment from Bill Schott
This one-hundred-word story, Doctor's Interference, has the proper word count and finds the young romantic couple visiting the veterinarian on the same day. Here's hoping there's no spaying or neutering on the schedule.
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This one-hundred-word story, Doctor's Interference, has the proper word count and finds the young romantic couple visiting the veterinarian on the same day. Here's hoping there's no spaying or neutering on the schedule.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2021
Comment from Begin Again
Adorable! Of course, anything about our fur babies makes me smile and take notice. It was a very cute and appropriate entry for the contest. I wish you luck. Smiles to you!
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Adorable! Of course, anything about our fur babies makes me smile and take notice. It was a very cute and appropriate entry for the contest. I wish you luck. Smiles to you!
Comment Written 03-Jan-2021
