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As Time Went By

The continuation to the perfect years.

35 total reviews 
Comment from RGstar
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

You did so well here. I wanted to come over to the book side to support. I was pleasantly surprised. Nicely formulated, with some beautiful expressions that can't be taught, they are within.
Nicely done my friend.
Have a great week, and an abundant year.
My very best.
RG

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
    It's truly an honor to have this rating from you, dear friend.
reply by RGstar on 12-Jan-2021
    You are welcome ...deserved. Well done.
Comment from tfawcus
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I experienced service life for more than fifteen years and understand where this comes from. I like the way your story's emphasis moves from possessions and place towards the far more important part of life - family.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
    I so appreciate stopping by and reading my words.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A reflection of youth and a busy family and how time flies when the kids are growing up fast. I enjoyed your journey here and life slows down to a snails pace when we are older but we appreciate our wonderful memories, a joy to read, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
    Thank you so much, Dolly, you understand so well the passage of time...
Comment from Susan Larson
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This is priceless. Your picturesque way of describing your evolution, acceptance and then comfort with your rebuilt life as time went by could be an inspiration to any military wife.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
    Thank you Susan, your comments are inspiring.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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It must be hard being the wife of a military man, and having to uproot every so often and move on. But you managed to do so with a song in your voice and love in your heart. This was an excellent story of life. Well done. Sandra xx

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
    Thank you for your great review,Sandra.
Comment from Tpa
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I enjoyed your story and many accolades to you for leading a difficult transit life. However, your words told of a courageous woman who gave love to both her husband and children lived a pleasant life. GOOD READ.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
    Thank you for stopping by and reading this work.
Comment from Alli Johnston
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You're so strong. Thank you for sharing your experiences in a beautiful, detailed way that was so much enjoyable to read. Your metaphors, similes, and comparisons throughout the story were perfect. Great work

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
    Your comments are so loving. I am touched. Thank you, Alli.
Comment from estory
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I like the fragmented feel of this, the snippets of moments in this journey of your life, full of images of dancing with the kids and TV dinners and the endless moving boxes. There's an upbeat tone here, a sense of nostalgia, of looking over your shoulder at happy memories you didn't seem to recognize at the time, being immersed in the action. estory

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
    Thank you so much, estory.
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
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I don't think the families of servicemen/servicewomen get near the
respect and admiration they deserve. Too many fail to realize the
toll that leaving one's friends, doctors, place of worship, school, etc.
take on each individual and the family collectively.

Thank you for sharing your story with us.
Rdfrdmom2

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
    I so appreciatge your noble comments, dear Rd.
Comment from kmoss
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This is a well-written story about the chaos of navy life. Thank you for sharing a vulnerable story. It sounds like you learned to dance to the music of life, to the hard, sad songs and the upbeat melodies that children tend to bring.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
    Thank you so much for reading and ccommenting.