Lord of the Flies
Fly-by Dialogue Only Entry31 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your dialogue-only story is VERY creative and funny. I must get some of that flypaper, since the little devils hide when they see me with a swatter.
It would be hard to pick the funniest part!
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Your dialogue-only story is VERY creative and funny. I must get some of that flypaper, since the little devils hide when they see me with a swatter.
It would be hard to pick the funniest part!
Comment Written 04-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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When it rains it pours goodness. Thanks so much for the review of the silly thing. I can really be super silly. Thanks so much again and I really appreciate it. Sending you my best today as always, Sally XOs..
Comment from damommy
It's nice that Maverick will bring his friend some take out. Maybe he can get the energy to get loose, too. Their ideas of a tasty lunch are certainly different from mine. lol. Cute story. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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It's nice that Maverick will bring his friend some take out. Maybe he can get the energy to get loose, too. Their ideas of a tasty lunch are certainly different from mine. lol. Cute story. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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I read this and I think that I really write that? Oh well I'll give it a swat. Pun intended. Sending you my best, Sally XOs...
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Sal.
This sounds like a conversation between flies. Except for fly paper, their lives seem to be going their way. They are disgusting little critters.
I hope you don't get disqualified. I wrote a dialogue only contest between a man and a dog and was disQ'ed by "the committee" because the dialogue wasn't between two humans.
Z
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Hello Sal.
This sounds like a conversation between flies. Except for fly paper, their lives seem to be going their way. They are disgusting little critters.
I hope you don't get disqualified. I wrote a dialogue only contest between a man and a dog and was disQ'ed by "the committee" because the dialogue wasn't between two humans.
Z
Comment Written 04-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review of my silliest thing I think I've ever written. I really appreciate it, dear see. Sending along my best today as always, Sally :))
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You're welcome.
Z
Comment from Ric Myworld
Talking flies, huh, I guess I've learned something new today, which doesn't come easy for me. The next time I walk by flypaper and hear voices talking about food, I'll know where to look. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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Talking flies, huh, I guess I've learned something new today, which doesn't come easy for me. The next time I walk by flypaper and hear voices talking about food, I'll know where to look. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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I was in the silliest mood. I have all boys and it's easy for me to go there. Thank you for the wonderful review. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal :))
Comment from fm wright
A very clever dialogue only entry. I truly wish you the best with this one. It flows well ans is easy to follow. The artwork and video really set it off. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
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A very clever dialogue only entry. I truly wish you the best with this one. It flows well ans is easy to follow. The artwork and video really set it off. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review and star shine, dear Faye. Once again, I am b,eased beyond descriptions. Sending you my best and blessings always,
Sal XOs...xo.....
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You are most welcome. I found it a very creative piece.
Blessings,
Faye
Comment from TommyWrites
This is kind of gross...and yet hilarious at the same time! I really like how you executed this piece. I really felt like I was hearing a flies thought. This piece if funny, nicely written, and I throughly enjoyed it. The picture you chose is perfect, and helps set the story even more.
Great job!
Thanks for sharing,
TommyWrites~
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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This is kind of gross...and yet hilarious at the same time! I really like how you executed this piece. I really felt like I was hearing a flies thought. This piece if funny, nicely written, and I throughly enjoyed it. The picture you chose is perfect, and helps set the story even more.
Great job!
Thanks for sharing,
TommyWrites~
Comment Written 04-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review, dear Tommy. If I made you laugh, my work is done here. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal :))
Comment from Debbie Pope
This is so original, Sally. Well done. Good characterization of your two flies and good descriptions of our delectable food choices. The conversation is natural and humorous.
Good luck in the contest. This should do well.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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This is so original, Sally. Well done. Good characterization of your two flies and good descriptions of our delectable food choices. The conversation is natural and humorous.
Good luck in the contest. This should do well.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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Thank you, dear Debbie. My silliest yet, I think. Sending you my best from the yellow strip. Sal XOs....
Comment from Ben Colder
Girl, you are a mess. LOL. I am still laughing with this one. Since you were a maggot. Heard a joke once concerning this theme but will not share it for now.
Good one Sal.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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Girl, you are a mess. LOL. I am still laughing with this one. Since you were a maggot. Heard a joke once concerning this theme but will not share it for now.
Good one Sal.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review and kind comments. I have all boys so I come by this humor honestly. Five brothers, too. Sending you my best today always,
Sal :))
Comment from Earl Corp
Very creative using Top Gun characters as flies stuck to a fly strip. I really enjoy when people give human characteristics to other things like insects or animals. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Very creative using Top Gun characters as flies stuck to a fly strip. I really enjoy when people give human characteristics to other things like insects or animals. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Some people actually missed the little Top Gun innuendos. I thought it was pretty obvious, but that's just me. I have all sons and come by this honestly. Sending my best today is always a many thanks for your kind review, Sally :))
Comment from barbara.wilkey
When my older boys were still at home a probably in Jr. High, their favorite movie was Top Gun. I had actually forgotten about it. LOL I watched until I was so sick of it. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us and good luck.
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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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When my older boys were still at home a probably in Jr. High, their favorite movie was Top Gun. I had actually forgotten about it. LOL I watched until I was so sick of it. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us and good luck.
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Comment Written 04-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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I have a boys to come by this quite honestly. I'm glad you enjoyed and I thank you very much for your kind review, Sally XOs....
