Lord of the Flies
Fly-by Dialogue Only Entry31 total reviews
Comment from A. Willow Bends
Wow! This is a little piece of thinking WAY outside the box. CUTE and quite humorous! Your inner thoughts . . . quite interesting? How do you end on a fly strip? I think I need to put 1000 random topics in a tophat and just draw one out and go crazy! At any rate, this is great! :)
Wendy
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021
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Wow! This is a little piece of thinking WAY outside the box. CUTE and quite humorous! Your inner thoughts . . . quite interesting? How do you end on a fly strip? I think I need to put 1000 random topics in a tophat and just draw one out and go crazy! At any rate, this is great! :)
Wendy
Comment Written 10-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review dear Wendy. As always, you're such an encouragement, no matter what I write! Sending you my best and blessings always,
Sal XOs....
Comment from Bill Schott
This dialogue-only story, Lord of the Flies, brings the reader the Martin and Lewis of the fly community. These guys should get top billing and be here all week.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
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This dialogue-only story, Lord of the Flies, brings the reader the Martin and Lewis of the fly community. These guys should get top billing and be here all week.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
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Thank you for the great review and top-billing! I'm so glad you enjoyed this silly thing. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal :)) xo
Comment from Ronni
Hi dear Sally!
Took me awhile to stop giggling over this hilarious Dialogue poem,
before I could even contemplate a reply dear! LOL...this so clever
and so closely akin to some human kind of predilections and
dialogue it's impossible not to see the bemusing connection and
comparison...LOL... Tempting and teasing menu these flies had
to stick on or unstick to! LOL...
Thanks for sharing and best of luck in contest!!
Love always, Ronni
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
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Hi dear Sally!
Took me awhile to stop giggling over this hilarious Dialogue poem,
before I could even contemplate a reply dear! LOL...this so clever
and so closely akin to some human kind of predilections and
dialogue it's impossible not to see the bemusing connection and
comparison...LOL... Tempting and teasing menu these flies had
to stick on or unstick to! LOL...
Thanks for sharing and best of luck in contest!!
Love always, Ronni
Comment Written 08-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
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Is this just the silliest thing? I can't believe I wrote this. Oh well, I had fun and a good laugh. Thank you for the great review, Ronni dear! Sending you my best and blessings always,
Sal XOs....
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Sally,
I remember those rolls of flypaper. They were sooo sticky. They actually worked very well... so many corpses side by each, all the way from top to bottom.
A funny write! I really enjoyed the humor.
"It's called flypaper, Goose.
Since when?
Since you were a maggot."
The life of a fly, eh? ... ditching fly swatters, and where to eat?
"Takeout it is!"
Nicely penned! Good Luck in the contest!
Hugs,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
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Hi Sally,
I remember those rolls of flypaper. They were sooo sticky. They actually worked very well... so many corpses side by each, all the way from top to bottom.
A funny write! I really enjoyed the humor.
"It's called flypaper, Goose.
Since when?
Since you were a maggot."
The life of a fly, eh? ... ditching fly swatters, and where to eat?
"Takeout it is!"
Nicely penned! Good Luck in the contest!
Hugs,
Kimbob
Comment Written 07-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review and for the far out mind to comprehend this. I have all sons and come by this kind of humor honestly. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally XOs...
Comment from poetwatch
So you are a fly-by-night writer, Sally. :) I must write. Anyone who makes a fly a want-a-be star is in a class of their own. I read the joke about the fly on the windshield of a trailer, but you take the three-year-old cake. :) This is very good. I hope I never have flies talking to me. Thank you for sharing. :)
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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So you are a fly-by-night writer, Sally. :) I must write. Anyone who makes a fly a want-a-be star is in a class of their own. I read the joke about the fly on the windshield of a trailer, but you take the three-year-old cake. :) This is very good. I hope I never have flies talking to me. Thank you for sharing. :)
Comment Written 06-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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This is just as silly as it gets. I added some "Top Gun" humor for fun. So glad you enjoyed this. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally :))
Comment from RetroStarfish
Very clever and a delight to read! Although, I must say it made me hungry.
They are flies, but you've imbued personality in this witty dialogue. Fantastic ending.
One small thing '... you've culled my interest..." I think you meant to say caught my interested or piqued my interest.
Great story. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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Very clever and a delight to read! Although, I must say it made me hungry.
They are flies, but you've imbued personality in this witty dialogue. Fantastic ending.
One small thing '... you've culled my interest..." I think you meant to say caught my interested or piqued my interest.
Great story. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review and recommend changed. I changed culled to piqued. Thanks again! Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xos
Comment from lyenochka
That's funny. That is awfully nice of Goose to offer "Chinese take-out" for his stuck friend! I liked your imagination of the fly conversation. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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That's funny. That is awfully nice of Goose to offer "Chinese take-out" for his stuck friend! I liked your imagination of the fly conversation. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review of this silly thing. I let loose with Goose on this one. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs.....
Comment from patcelaw
This is a fun dialogue read. I wish you the best in the contest. Many blessings to you for a good year filled with peace and love.
Patricia
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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This is a fun dialogue read. I wish you the best in the contest. Many blessings to you for a good year filled with peace and love.
Patricia
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Thank you very much for the wonderful review and kind comments. So glad you enjoyed it. Sending along my best to you and yours, Sally XOs....
Comment from BethShelby
This is funny. I like the attitude of these flies. No matter how dire the circumstances, they can still dream. Apparently the free fly plans to bring back takeout for his friend. Now that is true friendship. Great dialogue.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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This is funny. I like the attitude of these flies. No matter how dire the circumstances, they can still dream. Apparently the free fly plans to bring back takeout for his friend. Now that is true friendship. Great dialogue.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Thank you very much for the wonderful review and kind compliments, dear Beth. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Sending along my best today as always, Sally XOs....
Comment from Vanna1
Excellent presentation. Very interesting theme! This is a very creative piece. Funny too! I read it actually wanting to read it, not just for the points. Good luck.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Excellent presentation. Very interesting theme! This is a very creative piece. Funny too! I read it actually wanting to read it, not just for the points. Good luck.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review and generous compliments, dear Vanna. I'm glad you enjoyed this silly thing. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal :))
