Comment from Paul Borders

Excellent

I like this. As I was reading it, my mind immediately flashed back to a similar situation. Then I smiled at the end of the poem. I hope your entry receives lots of votes.

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021

Thank you, that's very nice of you. Hope your new year is going well. :)

Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)

Excellent

I love the triple end-line rhyme that you have managed to place on this poem. It is not easy on a counted syllable poem, but going the extra mile is worth the effort. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2021

Thank you, I really appreciate you reading and reviewing my poem. :)

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This 5-7-5 Love Poem is very simply worded but it has a good message, smile is appreciated as it brings happiness though it is ever different; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021

Thank you so much for reading my poem, it's very appreciated. :)

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 5-7-5, Your Smile, has the right set up and seems to place responsibility for love on a good grin. This is a curse which must be borne.

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021

Yes it is, but in my and my husband's case, his smile was a blessing. Thanks so much for reading. :)