Minutemen Attack
American Revolutionary War Battle15 total reviews
Comment from Jaime Deagle
A short poem that packs a punch filled with strong imagery that gives a clear picture in your head when reading the poem. I enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing your work with us all.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021
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A short poem that packs a punch filled with strong imagery that gives a clear picture in your head when reading the poem. I enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing your work with us all.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for your message and review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed your apt descriptions here Lance and you brought the scene to life. As you have not used an iambic meter here I am not sure if your write will be accepted by the judges, but if may not be that strict, I wish you luck, I enjoyed your story here, a little snippet of history, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2021
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I enjoyed your apt descriptions here Lance and you brought the scene to life. As you have not used an iambic meter here I am not sure if your write will be accepted by the judges, but if may not be that strict, I wish you luck, I enjoyed your story here, a little snippet of history, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2021
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Oh you had me worried. This poem prompt is Not that strict. Thank you for your review.
Comment from DonandVicki
Thank God for our forefathers determination. I cannot even imagine what it would be like to be a British subject. I wonder how many Americans have this kind of grit nowadays?
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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Thank God for our forefathers determination. I cannot even imagine what it would be like to be a British subject. I wonder how many Americans have this kind of grit nowadays?
Comment Written 01-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your review
Comment from Boogienights
Very well done and descriptive. I never knew that term was used to describe a battle, but I can see it. Your poem and picture are great, thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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Very well done and descriptive. I never knew that term was used to describe a battle, but I can see it. Your poem and picture are great, thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your review
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
American Revolutionary War Battle
Minutemen Attack
by Lance Loria
Hello, Lance,
Excellent entry for the Minute contest. Your poem is a minute poem and it's about minute men... that's clever. I read that they were called that because they were ready to fight in a minute's notice. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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American Revolutionary War Battle
Minutemen Attack
by Lance Loria
Hello, Lance,
Excellent entry for the Minute contest. Your poem is a minute poem and it's about minute men... that's clever. I read that they were called that because they were ready to fight in a minute's notice. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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You are correct about the name. Thank you for your review.
Comment from Sherry Asbury2
I can't imagine what men go through - and now women too - when they know battle is imminent. However, your short, pithy lines give the poem a cadence that fits the subject. I know I would be the one standing in the middle hollering, "Now, you guys, just cut it out..."
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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I can't imagine what men go through - and now women too - when they know battle is imminent. However, your short, pithy lines give the poem a cadence that fits the subject. I know I would be the one standing in the middle hollering, "Now, you guys, just cut it out..."
Comment Written 01-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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Hahaha. Thanks for your comments. Thank you for your review.
Comment from RetroStarfish
Great poem. I love the format - it pulses like a battle and your words have taken me right on to the bloody field. You've painted a vivid picture with only a few (and rhyming) words. Well done and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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Great poem. I love the format - it pulses like a battle and your words have taken me right on to the bloody field. You've painted a vivid picture with only a few (and rhyming) words. Well done and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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Thanks so much for your review.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your minute poem is excellent in every respect--skillfully composed (meeting standards for the type of poem) and vividly descriptive of the confusion and terror of battle--even when much training has taken place.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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Your minute poem is excellent in every respect--skillfully composed (meeting standards for the type of poem) and vividly descriptive of the confusion and terror of battle--even when much training has taken place.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from Raul1
This is an interesting poem contest entry you have penned here. I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It is clear and concise. No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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This is an interesting poem contest entry you have penned here. I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It is clear and concise. No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 01-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I enjoyed reading your poem
i like the artwork you choose to go with your poem they are a perfect match
It captured my attention from the first line the the last
Thank t you for sharing.
Cookie
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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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I enjoyed reading your poem
i like the artwork you choose to go with your poem they are a perfect match
It captured my attention from the first line the the last
Thank t you for sharing.
Cookie
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your review and comments.
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I recognize you as a highly rated reviewer so I hesitate asking, but did you intend to rate this a 4? If so, was there any specific edit or adjustment you identified? I?m seeking feedback. Thank you.
