Comment from hager

Exceptional

Funny image matches poem and I wonder if the matchmaker probably made a bundle on this one... seems like a lot to ask of the groom or he is just the same? hugs... Bill

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2023

I had to go back and reread. It?s been so long

Comment from Poetic Friend

Excellent

Happy New Year!

Wow, I have not read one of your gems in such a long time. I do not frequent the site often.

This is absolutely hilarious. The double meaning of "blind" is clever and creative. Great usage of minimalism. Not single syllable for the sake of the poetic form.

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021

Haha thanks!!

Comment from RetroStarfish

Excellent

You have written a witty senryu. I loved the last line - and the creative choice of artwork. It implies a long and happy marriage followed the 'recently married.' Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 31-Dec-2020

Or it could mean the 8th marriage. You never know! Haha

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

At least this bride is smiling and she seems like a happy companion! Your poem made me smile here and this is a good entry for the contest, a little humour goes a long way in a marriage, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 31-Dec-2020

I have always thought Senyru?s were to have a witty ending and bit if wry wit. Thank you for your review!

Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

I didn't know if you meant to be funny or not, but the picture made it hilarious. Good luck in the contest. Very nice job. Thank you for sharing. Stay safe and stay healthy.

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 31-Dec-2020

Funny indeed!