Platitude
Words that once warmed you can suddenly become meaningless.2 total reviews
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
Nice job. You've used only 22 or 23 words (I got a different count each time) you've shared a pretty complete story. Yikes!
This would be a rather tragic situation. Thanks and good luck!
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2020
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Dear Mystery Writer,
Nice job. You've used only 22 or 23 words (I got a different count each time) you've shared a pretty complete story. Yikes!
This would be a rather tragic situation. Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 29-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2020
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Thank you for your words of encouragement and for reading and reviewing my flash fiction entry. You are appreciated. Blessings.
Comment from Pantygynt
This compliant as fewer than twenty-dive words is allowed. This has twenty-three words. Would it have been more powerful, and still compliant to have used one more word and written the last line as 'He doesn't know I heard him say those words to someone else yesterday'?
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2020
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This compliant as fewer than twenty-dive words is allowed. This has twenty-three words. Would it have been more powerful, and still compliant to have used one more word and written the last line as 'He doesn't know I heard him say those words to someone else yesterday'?
Comment Written 29-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2020
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Ahhh! This is my very first attempt at a flash fiction piece, and I was trying to figure out how I could use one or two more words with the most effectiveness. It did not even occur to me to put those words at the very end. duh! What if I ended it with one of these:
"Really?"
Big world.
So what?
Thank you for your suggestion.
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Why not?
