Closing yesterday's door
new year ahead11 total reviews
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
Nicely written 8-6 poem. Looking forward to what might be. Closing yesterday's door. Beautiful photo to go with your words good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
Nicely written 8-6 poem. Looking forward to what might be. Closing yesterday's door. Beautiful photo to go with your words good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Comment from equestrik
This is a lovely presentation with your well chosen picture along with your writing-they go well together and portray a positive attitude looking forward, not to the past.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
This is a lovely presentation with your well chosen picture along with your writing-they go well together and portray a positive attitude looking forward, not to the past.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the 8-6 Syllable line count. writing prompt contest. Good contest rules format.
Excellent message about the new year and closing 2020. I'll toast to that.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the 8-6 Syllable line count. writing prompt contest. Good contest rules format.
Excellent message about the new year and closing 2020. I'll toast to that.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Comment from Wendy G
This is a positive and optimistic poem, because it is looking forward to new possibilities unfettered by the difficulties of the past year - the door on 2020 has closed, and no negative comment is necessary. Well written.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
This is a positive and optimistic poem, because it is looking forward to new possibilities unfettered by the difficulties of the past year - the door on 2020 has closed, and no negative comment is necessary. Well written.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Yes! Putting the past behind us here with your poignant words as we welcome the new year with hope and faith that it will bring us a brighter future, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
Yes! Putting the past behind us here with your poignant words as we welcome the new year with hope and faith that it will bring us a brighter future, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This 8-6 syllable line count poem speaks metaphorically the end of the year - closing of the door, keeping and looking forward of the New Year ahead; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
This 8-6 syllable line count poem speaks metaphorically the end of the year - closing of the door, keeping and looking forward of the New Year ahead; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 29-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I hope and pray that the new year will bring lots of great things for us. It is so good to see a new year roll in so we can leave 2020 behind. The vaccine has given us much hope and trust in scientists. Good health for Americans will hopefully happen.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
I hope and pray that the new year will bring lots of great things for us. It is so good to see a new year roll in so we can leave 2020 behind. The vaccine has given us much hope and trust in scientists. Good health for Americans will hopefully happen.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 8-6 line poem about start looking forward to the new year we start closing the door on the previous year and will be able to forget and bury the troubles of this year.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
A very well-written 8-6 line poem about start looking forward to the new year we start closing the door on the previous year and will be able to forget and bury the troubles of this year.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Comment from RodG
I like the quiet optimism expressed in this short two-line poem. The Speaker talks of boldly stepping through a door into the future, then closing it--and the past--behind you. Rod
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
I like the quiet optimism expressed in this short two-line poem. The Speaker talks of boldly stepping through a door into the future, then closing it--and the past--behind you. Rod
Comment Written 29-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Comment from Becky Kern-Taylor
How clever and insightful. Just two lines and a total of 14 syllables. Excellent thinking. Did something prompt this poem or was it just thought of from some other happening or maybe someone else's happening? Very good work either way and I am so glad I caught it.
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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2020
How clever and insightful. Just two lines and a total of 14 syllables. Excellent thinking. Did something prompt this poem or was it just thought of from some other happening or maybe someone else's happening? Very good work either way and I am so glad I caught it.
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Comment Written 28-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2020
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Thanks for reading and commenting on this little contest entry. I appreciate it.