Sweet Gesture
A little girl with a giving heart.6 total reviews
Comment from RetroStarfish
How adorable. You've not only told a sweet story, you've done it with a few well chosen and well placed words. Well done! I can just picture Laura and her frosty friend.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2021
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How adorable. You've not only told a sweet story, you've done it with a few well chosen and well placed words. Well done! I can just picture Laura and her frosty friend.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2021
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Thanks much for the read, review and encouraging comments.
Comment from Begin Again
2020 was a year filled with sadness, but one thing is for sure; it taught us to remember and care about others. Your contest entry touched the heart of the reader because even the youngest can teach us to care. Happy New Year!
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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2020 was a year filled with sadness, but one thing is for sure; it taught us to remember and care about others. Your contest entry touched the heart of the reader because even the youngest can teach us to care. Happy New Year!
Comment Written 01-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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Thanks for the read and encouraging feedback.
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Smiles and happy writing
Comment from Valerie Fish
Oh that is so cute, don't know if it's true, hope so. Certainly put a smile on my face, just what's needed in these troubled times. good luck in contest.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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Oh that is so cute, don't know if it's true, hope so. Certainly put a smile on my face, just what's needed in these troubled times. good luck in contest.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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Thanks for the read and encouraging feedback.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Thank you for sharing the
photo and your story.
-It was a very sweet gesture.
-Children are so perceptive
and very caring and sensitive
to things around them.
-Your daughter sounds like
one of those people.
-I love the snowman's scarf, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
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-Thank you for sharing the
photo and your story.
-It was a very sweet gesture.
-Children are so perceptive
and very caring and sensitive
to things around them.
-Your daughter sounds like
one of those people.
-I love the snowman's scarf, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
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Thanks for the read, review and the lovely comments.
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You are welcome.
Comment from RodG
Children are so sweet and caring and sensitive even when their plaything is inanimate. I love the picture and agree daughter's gesture was a "sweet" one. Rod
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
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Children are so sweet and caring and sensitive even when their plaything is inanimate. I love the picture and agree daughter's gesture was a "sweet" one. Rod
Comment Written 27-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
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Thanks for the read, review and the kind comments.
Comment from mmayen
A good attempt that with more work has the potential to stand out. There is a lot of telling instead of showing and according to the challenge the 25-word is meant to hint us to a bigger picture. Without the contest rules, it's a short prose that I'd enjoy reading any day.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
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A good attempt that with more work has the potential to stand out. There is a lot of telling instead of showing and according to the challenge the 25-word is meant to hint us to a bigger picture. Without the contest rules, it's a short prose that I'd enjoy reading any day.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
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Thanks I will look over to see if I can improve it.
