Assassin Nation
Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "Assassin Nation: Hiatus"A sequel to the novel Baker's Dozen
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Comment from Asem.inspirations
Hey Bill: It's me Tier V. King. I see that this mist be the end of a story and you've said that you will take a break wit this. I'll be looking for the rest of it to read from the beginning. I've missed your work.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2020
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Hey Bill: It's me Tier V. King. I see that this mist be the end of a story and you've said that you will take a break wit this. I'll be looking for the rest of it to read from the beginning. I've missed your work.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2020
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Thank you, Tier.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Your story is deep and complicated, but so worth reading. Your writing style is envious, and I learn from it. I am sure your little hiatus will work in your favor!
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2020
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Your story is deep and complicated, but so worth reading. Your writing style is envious, and I learn from it. I am sure your little hiatus will work in your favor!
Comment Written 29-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2020
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You are very kind, TT. I feel the same about your writing. Bill
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
This is somewhat explanatory. What I see here is 'A Murder A Month' will take over the main story and the above-mentioned people will be immersed in that story. Am I right?
Ralf
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2020
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This is somewhat explanatory. What I see here is 'A Murder A Month' will take over the main story and the above-mentioned people will be immersed in that story. Am I right?
Ralf
Comment Written 28-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2020
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Inspector Schlitz will pursue his own investigations. I have no plans on having the stories meet again ? unless it works out that way.
Comment from lyenochka
Thank you for the heads up. I like that you are planning an international arena for these interesting characters to play in. Hope you and your family are truly blessed with health and joy in the New Year!
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the heads up. I like that you are planning an international arena for these interesting characters to play in. Hope you and your family are truly blessed with health and joy in the New Year!
Comment Written 28-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2020
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Thank you, Helen, for the good wishes for family and stories. Happy New Year!
Comment from Earl Corp
I'm sorry to see you end the storyline. I'm curious how Piglette makes out. Oh well, I'll have to wait. Thanks for letting us know. Stay safe and stay healthy.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2020
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I'm sorry to see you end the storyline. I'm curious how Piglette makes out. Oh well, I'll have to wait. Thanks for letting us know. Stay safe and stay healthy.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2020
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I'll try something else.
Comment from robyn corum
Bill,
I like it. I mean, what bad guy isn't into SOME form of world domination? That's what makes the evil world go round. haha
I like the Illinois angle. I look forward to more!
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
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Bill,
I like it. I mean, what bad guy isn't into SOME form of world domination? That's what makes the evil world go round. haha
I like the Illinois angle. I look forward to more!
Comment Written 27-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
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Thank you, Robyn.
Comment from nomi338
Good luck. I do not for the life of me, know how in the heck you are keeping this all together. Nevertheless, you have done a remarkable job of keeping your readers guessing and hopping from one theory to another. Boy does my head hurt. I may have developed a case of vertigo from being on the dizzying heights and then suddenly dashed down to the depths.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
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Good luck. I do not for the life of me, know how in the heck you are keeping this all together. Nevertheless, you have done a remarkable job of keeping your readers guessing and hopping from one theory to another. Boy does my head hurt. I may have developed a case of vertigo from being on the dizzying heights and then suddenly dashed down to the depths.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
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You are very gracious, nomi, and I appreciate your following these stories.
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Even though it makes my head spin and my eyes roll back in my head. I am committed to reading each and every one. No doubt.
Comment from Mistydawn
So the action dies down temporarily. I guess they could use a break after all they've done. I have one question though, what happened to the president? Did they kill him or are they holding him hostage?
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
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So the action dies down temporarily. I guess they could use a break after all they've done. I have one question though, what happened to the president? Did they kill him or are they holding him hostage?
Comment Written 27-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
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The President is okay, just a second banana to the real power in the White House.
Comment from Ulla
Okay, I will keep this in mind and look out for it. I will try to go back and find the previous story line so I'm prepared when you pick up the threads. All best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
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Okay, I will keep this in mind and look out for it. I will try to go back and find the previous story line so I'm prepared when you pick up the threads. All best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 27-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
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Thank you, Ulla
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I am going to bookcase this and start at the beginning. I've enjoyed reading the parts I've seen, but you started before I became a fan. I shall rectify that. I hope you had a lovely Christmas, Bill. :)) Sandra xx
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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
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I am going to bookcase this and start at the beginning. I've enjoyed reading the parts I've seen, but you started before I became a fan. I shall rectify that. I hope you had a lovely Christmas, Bill. :)) Sandra xx
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Comment Written 27-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
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You are very kind, Sandra. I would appreciate your critiques. I encourage you to read the original story, Baker?s Dozen, in my books archive. Thank you, Bill
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I'll look for that now. :))
