Assassin Nation
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Assassin Nation: Homecoming"A sequel to the novel Baker's Dozen
10 total reviews
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear Bill,You cannot leave me hanging like this with every post. Leaving me wondering who are the good guys, and who is going to be disposed of next !
I can say one thing for sure, this novel is going to be a page turner that no one can put down until the end.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
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Dear Bill,You cannot leave me hanging like this with every post. Leaving me wondering who are the good guys, and who is going to be disposed of next !
I can say one thing for sure, this novel is going to be a page turner that no one can put down until the end.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
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Thank you, Suzanna. I?m going to take some time and weave all the loose ends into the story line. Other projects are coming ou5 now.
Comment from nomi338
Ha, ha. And the ball just keeps spinning around and around. On whom will it stop next? No matter for it will not be there for long. Next man up or down as the situation dictates. I hope you are using a score card, because the game keeps changing. I am along for the ride no matter where it all ends up. Wheee!
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
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Ha, ha. And the ball just keeps spinning around and around. On whom will it stop next? No matter for it will not be there for long. Next man up or down as the situation dictates. I hope you are using a score card, because the game keeps changing. I am along for the ride no matter where it all ends up. Wheee!
Comment Written 27-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
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I?m giving this story a rest for a while, nomi. I know there?s another layer here to weave in so it all ends up as one novel.
Comment from Mistydawn
The story keeps getting more and more intense. I wonder if Jason is in trouble now he saw Bends, knows their secret. It sounds like the president is in some serious trouble. Your chapter is well-written, interesting. I look forward to reading more.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
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The story keeps getting more and more intense. I wonder if Jason is in trouble now he saw Bends, knows their secret. It sounds like the president is in some serious trouble. Your chapter is well-written, interesting. I look forward to reading more.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
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I am putting this on the back burner while I prep Baker?s Dozen and Pons and Ned for printing. Thanks for following, MD.
Comment from BethShelby
This is an intriguing story. It is complicated enough that it would be more easily understood if we could keep reading instead of getting it in small doses. It sounds like Marr is in trouble for knowing more than he should. I don't if this president is in on what is going on or not.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
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This is an intriguing story. It is complicated enough that it would be more easily understood if we could keep reading instead of getting it in small doses. It sounds like Marr is in trouble for knowing more than he should. I don't if this president is in on what is going on or not.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
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This chapter is reaching back to another book, Baker?s Dozen, which is too much to expect readers to know. I?m shelving the story until I have it smoothed out.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Bill, I'm still trying to getting to understand this story. I must have missed a lot of the previous story. But to me it seems that the President is now in danger of assassination. But bear with me I will grasp it at one point. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
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Hi Bill, I'm still trying to getting to understand this story. I must have missed a lot of the previous story. But to me it seems that the President is now in danger of assassination. But bear with me I will grasp it at one point. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 27-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
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I?m putting the story on ice for a while, Yvonne. There will be an announcement forthwith.
Comment from lyenochka
Oh-oh. So is Red Appleton also going to be assassinated? Will Piglette take his place? Things are getting awfully complicated. I hope someone will know what's happening. Good to have Baker back in the scene.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
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Oh-oh. So is Red Appleton also going to be assassinated? Will Piglette take his place? Things are getting awfully complicated. I hope someone will know what's happening. Good to have Baker back in the scene.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
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I think we?ve come full circle with this story line. Assassins WILL be deployed and C.C. Connor will be a shadow government commander. Milliliter Manowitz will be his constant rival; Samantha Anthra will assist them, while Manny Kontroz is out to pull it all down.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Wow. C.C.Corner ordered the assassination of Jason Marr just because he saw Bend alive and knew too much? This is really a one murder per chapter or is that a different book of yours?
Well done and are looking forward to the next chapter.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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Wow. C.C.Corner ordered the assassination of Jason Marr just because he saw Bend alive and knew too much? This is really a one murder per chapter or is that a different book of yours?
Well done and are looking forward to the next chapter.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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Thanks, Lisa. This is a throwback to an earlier method of getting rid of problems.
Comment from Jay Squires
I am soooo sorry, Bill. I don't get heads nor tails of this story. Does the President know that his sign language is being read by only half the people in the room? Does the pres know what Samantha is doing on her wrist device? If yes, why doesn't he save time and make the announcement verbally? And what is the announcement?
Who is Sonny? His name isn't in the character list. The Pres, I'm assuming.
And what of the conclusion that if he hadn't moved he would be dead. There were no gunshots, no darts penetrating his chair.
And in the mix, someone mentions Bends (Piglett?) in some sort of a plane crash.
This chapter lacks focus. It's all over the place. And I'm really sorry. It may be me. Did I get in too late for the dance?
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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I am soooo sorry, Bill. I don't get heads nor tails of this story. Does the President know that his sign language is being read by only half the people in the room? Does the pres know what Samantha is doing on her wrist device? If yes, why doesn't he save time and make the announcement verbally? And what is the announcement?
Who is Sonny? His name isn't in the character list. The Pres, I'm assuming.
And what of the conclusion that if he hadn't moved he would be dead. There were no gunshots, no darts penetrating his chair.
And in the mix, someone mentions Bends (Piglett?) in some sort of a plane crash.
This chapter lacks focus. It's all over the place. And I'm really sorry. It may be me. Did I get in too late for the dance?
Comment Written 26-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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I rushed this out, Jay. I have edited a bit for clarity, but I?m not sure how much you could grasp without a deeper understanding of the overall story line.
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Then it's probably me, Bill. I've not been at my best in the area of concentration today anyway. I'll just hold back and see how things look next time.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
The witty, alliterative names are star-worthy in themselves. As always, delightfully clever and snarky--unassed his seat. sugg: (vs finger-) digitally-challenged, in keeping with familiar format of adverb as prefix--i.e. mentally-challenged vs (noun) brain-challenged.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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The witty, alliterative names are star-worthy in themselves. As always, delightfully clever and snarky--unassed his seat. sugg: (vs finger-) digitally-challenged, in keeping with familiar format of adverb as prefix--i.e. mentally-challenged vs (noun) brain-challenged.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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Thanks, Liz.
Comment from Ben B.
President Red Appleton? It would be hilarious if we had an actual leader like that. Why exactly were they using sign langue? And what did you mean the president will be in his birthday suit? On second thought don't answer that.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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President Red Appleton? It would be hilarious if we had an actual leader like that. Why exactly were they using sign langue? And what did you mean the president will be in his birthday suit? On second thought don't answer that.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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The sign language connection comes later. CC Connor gets rid of people by sending them off to a training area in the wilderness ? naked.
