Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Author. I did not like the use of the 'bs' word though you did warn readers. Everything you included is true. I like all the situations and can't pick just one as a favorite. However, I do like the pumps a wasted, the clueless sonnets, five seven five, and a contest that took no brains at all--see I can't just pick one. Your words are well-chosen.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020

Thank you for the great review and stars, Jan. I just have fun poking fun at the site sometimes. Lol. I'm glad you liked this silliness except for the cussing. Have a great rest of your weekend.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written poem about the twelve dad of Christmas in FanStory fashion seems to be fun to be part of when you make it through the twelve days you stay forever.

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 Comment Written 25-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 25-Dec-2020

Lol, yes you do. Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Sandra. I'm glad you liked this silliness. Have a fantastic Christmas.