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A FanStory Christmas

12 Days of Christmas Parody Contest Entry

22 total reviews 
Comment from Wendy G
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Ha! Very clever and witty parody, using things we all understand and can relate to - although I hope that in general your experience has been better than this. Best wishes for the contest!

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
    Yes it has, I just like poking fun at the site sometimes. Lol. Thank you for the great review and stars, Wendy.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
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This poem is fun and it spoke some truth about the website. But we are still here because we are having fun despite of its shortcomings.

Well done and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
    Yes, we all love it. I just like to poke some fun at it once in a while. Thank you for the great review.
Comment from royowen
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Apart from being a little on the cynical side, a rather good entry, I guess not winning contests, or the results of them, can leave us in an in charitable mood, or at least we can vent our spleen, that's why I stopped entering, it did things to me, well done, good luck, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
    Thank you for the great review and stars, Roy. Yeah, I'm really just poking some fun at the site. I love the contests on here. That's pretty well all I do on here. I hope you have a great upcoming year.
reply by royowen on 27-Dec-2020
    Well done
Comment from jenintorre
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Love it, love it,Love it. Very clever and very funny you will surely get my vote. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Merry Christmas wishes. Jen.

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
    Thank you so much for the fantastic review and giant sixer, Jen. I really appreciate the gracious rating, support and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Thank you again.
Comment from LyndaS
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Oh, Lordy! This was hilarious! Very clever use of this song to slam just about everything on here. My favorites are the five seven fives and aimless newbies. Also loved the dead fans. OMG! Too funny! You nailed this prompt with a great presentation and you followed the rules, unlike some of these entries. This should do well in the booth. Good luck! Lynda

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
    Thank you for the awesome review and sixer, Lynda. Yeah it looks like a lot of folks don't like you poking fun at their favorite site. Lol. I'm glad you liked this silliness. I hope you have a fantastic upcoming year. Thank you again.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Ha ha ha! This is hilarious and inventive and may touch a nerve with some, the mix of trick or treats on Fanstory here all tied up in a Christmas parcel, much fun, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
    Thank you for the great review and stars, Dolly. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Woops, this poem is so scary, and oh, boy I don't want to cross your path, your nine day of Christmas it's a killer and scary experience :" On the ninth day of Christmas, Fanstory gave to me
nine aimless newbies,
eight spell-check errors,
seven clueless sonnets,
six stars for bullshit,
FIVE SEVEN FIVES,
four dead fans,
three fake friends,
two useless votes
and a contest that took no brains at all." So thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
    Thank you for the great review and stars, Iza. Have no fear, I'm only just goofing around. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. Have yourself a wonderful day.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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Hilarious! A literal LOL! This wickedly witty gem is going right in my bookcase. Delicious snark re StoryLand's star system and such. (I've posted a few parodies on this theme.)

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
    Thank you for the fantastic review, Elizabeth. I'm glad to see you jumped on as a fan. I write a lot of ridiculous stuff like this. Lol. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness. Have a great rest of your weekend.
Comment from AnnieDawn
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Wow, you kept up the tempo of the twelve days of Christmas and the lines were clever but I felt you were kind of putting down the site and I feel that it has given a lot of people a chance to come out of their shell and try something scary. I commend you for your cleverness but wish you would put it to a use that would uplift the site and those that work to do something out of their realm. Thank you for sharing your feelings though and I hope you are having a very Merry Christmas.

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
    Thank you for review and stars, Annie. I'm really only just goofing around, poking some fun at the place. Have a great rest of your weekend.
Comment from L. Kalere
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Other than a cynical tone:) it's actually very well written...and although I am doing this for funny money, I actually enjoyed your Christmas parody. It's good to see a little honesty. I just don't understand "five seven fives." Twelve monthly payments? Yikes. I promise I won't friend you.

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2020


reply by L. Kalere on 26-Dec-2020
    Duh...5/7/5...I'm a little slow on the uptake.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
    Thank you for the great review, LK. Yeah, it seems there's some sort of 5-7-5 contest on here every couple days. Lol. Some of us pay a monthly membership fee rather than a one lump sum. That's what that part meant. I'm really just poking some fun at the site. I really appreciate the generous stars. Have a great rest of your year and a happy new one.