We will fight
free verse.30 total reviews
Comment from Jeffrey Mitchell
All things work together, to them that love God, to those who are called to His purpose. Nothing can keep us from loving our God. Definitely no virus!! Thank for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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All things work together, to them that love God, to those who are called to His purpose. Nothing can keep us from loving our God. Definitely no virus!! Thank for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
I love this upbeat, positive and faith-filled poem. Yes, I believe that you are right in your confidence that we will root out this menace, and it will happen by faith, prayer, and God's mercy and grace, not simply by the works of man. Yes, we need to continue to take responsible actions, but God is our real hope in the midst of this crisis. The picture is very touching.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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I love this upbeat, positive and faith-filled poem. Yes, I believe that you are right in your confidence that we will root out this menace, and it will happen by faith, prayer, and God's mercy and grace, not simply by the works of man. Yes, we need to continue to take responsible actions, but God is our real hope in the midst of this crisis. The picture is very touching.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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Thank you very much.
Comment from A. Willow Bends
This could receive nothing but a six in my personal opinion. IT is strong and aggressive and it makes me feel what I AM FEELING! The photo choice, (you can't go wrong with Cleo!) is excellent. It helps that I love free verse, but you jumped out and nailed it with this one!
Perfection! In a time when we need it.
Wendy
A. Willow Bends
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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This could receive nothing but a six in my personal opinion. IT is strong and aggressive and it makes me feel what I AM FEELING! The photo choice, (you can't go wrong with Cleo!) is excellent. It helps that I love free verse, but you jumped out and nailed it with this one!
Perfection! In a time when we need it.
Wendy
A. Willow Bends
Comment Written 25-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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Thank you very much for this honour .Ye we cant go wrong with Cleo.Thanks from the bottom of my heart.
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
A very -well-written poem giving hope and courage in the difficult days. But this the most wonderful time of the year and words of courage and hope will fill our hearts with joy and will remind us of the reason for the season. Thanks for sharing. Good luck!
Merry Christmas!
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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A very -well-written poem giving hope and courage in the difficult days. But this the most wonderful time of the year and words of courage and hope will fill our hearts with joy and will remind us of the reason for the season. Thanks for sharing. Good luck!
Merry Christmas!
Comment Written 25-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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Thank you very much .Happy New year to you and your family.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
If we ever needed to trust, pray, and believe, it's now. Broken spirits can be healed only by the Lord; fears can be calmed only by Him. Your poem is profound in spirituality and uplifting meaning--a wonderful blend of literal and figurative language.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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If we ever needed to trust, pray, and believe, it's now. Broken spirits can be healed only by the Lord; fears can be calmed only by Him. Your poem is profound in spirituality and uplifting meaning--a wonderful blend of literal and figurative language.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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Thank you for understanding the spiritual element of my little poem.
Comment from DonandVicki
I hope that you are right as well. I pray that next year will be a brighter and less frightful year. I hope God will give us back some normalcy. A well written poem. Don
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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I hope that you are right as well. I pray that next year will be a brighter and less frightful year. I hope God will give us back some normalcy. A well written poem. Don
Comment Written 24-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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Thank you very much for stopping by. Yes .let us hope next year will be better
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is very well done. Your author's notes touched my heart as you write of hope and your confidence that we will overcome this "menace." "Viscious virus" and "sacred season" are two great examples of alliterative writing. "displaced" and "distressed" also show excellent good usage of this poetic device. "thorn" and "scorn" are super internal rhymes and add class to this wonderful commentary of our current situation and how we can lift above and "zoom in for Christmas prayer." Well written and extremely topical regarding our pandemic and the holiday season overlapping. Thanks for the insights.
Jesse
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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This is very well done. Your author's notes touched my heart as you write of hope and your confidence that we will overcome this "menace." "Viscious virus" and "sacred season" are two great examples of alliterative writing. "displaced" and "distressed" also show excellent good usage of this poetic device. "thorn" and "scorn" are super internal rhymes and add class to this wonderful commentary of our current situation and how we can lift above and "zoom in for Christmas prayer." Well written and extremely topical regarding our pandemic and the holiday season overlapping. Thanks for the insights.
Jesse
Comment Written 24-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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Thank you very much for your lovely review. I am so touched that the poem resonated with you.
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You are very welcome.
Jesse
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You're welcome.
Have a happy 2021.
Jesse
Comment from nomi338
As if the other things we have endured this year were not bad enough, Racial division, a major failure of our political system, disruption of all of our major sports, college and professional. Now our major holidays are suffering a disruption. 2020, cannot end soon enough.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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As if the other things we have endured this year were not bad enough, Racial division, a major failure of our political system, disruption of all of our major sports, college and professional. Now our major holidays are suffering a disruption. 2020, cannot end soon enough.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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Thank you very much.-yes what an year ! And the things that happened in US -I mean the elections.Hope next year will be better.Happy New year
Comment from TPAC
I found this to be a very compelling read, detailing viewpoints touching to heart prevailing the virus, seeing light in its darkness. I ventured in mind those living during Black plague their Christmas. All things stated in my given opinion.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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I found this to be a very compelling read, detailing viewpoints touching to heart prevailing the virus, seeing light in its darkness. I ventured in mind those living during Black plague their Christmas. All things stated in my given opinion.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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Thank you very much and have a peaceful (I believe thatis the most important thing that we need now)New Year.
Comment from Mastery
Thankyou for this prayer of sorts, Sanku. God bless you and Happy Holidays. These were my favorite lines in your poem:
"But our spirits wont be broken, our faith firm
we still have power to fight
The displaced and distressed shall find solace
as we share our joy with them."
Bob
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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Thankyou for this prayer of sorts, Sanku. God bless you and Happy Holidays. These were my favorite lines in your poem:
"But our spirits wont be broken, our faith firm
we still have power to fight
The displaced and distressed shall find solace
as we share our joy with them."
Bob
Comment Written 24-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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Thank you ,Bob. Stay safe with your family and Happy New year
