Comment from Liz O'Neill

Excellent

I like how you use literary techniques in this poem. Some of your words are onomatopoetic. These give a sensory experience to the reader. There are several sensory words, some alliterative. Well done.

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020

Thank you for the read, review and comments. I did purposely employ onomatopoetic words.

reply by Liz O'Neill on 27-Dec-2020

You did a good job. I appreciated your writing.

reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020

Thank you.

Comment from zanya

Exceptional

I can almost feel the chill in the air - great choice of word ' pewter'- tells it exactly how the waves look in winter -and one lonely gull - a wonderful sensory rendition of the wintry seascape

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020

Thank you for your read and your encouraging six star honor.

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

Your poem and picture combination opens up rippling thought, scenes remembered throughout life that happened on a beach or in front of crashing waves. Great job! Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020

Thank you for your read and review. Much appreciated.

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is an excellent descriptive 5-7-5 poem
with very good imagery of the ocean
and use of alliteration with the "s" and "w" sounds.
Good choice of picture.
Best wishes.
Robert

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020

Thank you for your read and encouraging review.