Comment from AJ McCall

Exceptional

Woah. I wonder what this thing is! Beisdes the language, this chapter was really intriguing. If they need Jace and Tessa, this thing's got to be huge! Detectives and Breedlines working together. Why exactly were these people experimenting on other people? I can't wait to read the next chapter!

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021

Thanks AJ :)

It looks like the Breedline and the two detectives have a mystery on their hands. Hopefully, they can solve it without anyone getting hurt in the process. You'll find out next Tuesday!
Thanks for following the chapters. I love to hear your feedback. My Breedline crew apologize for their savage language. LOL!

Thanks again,
Shana :)

reply by AJ McCall on 06-Jan-2021

Haha! Cool! You're welcome!

Comment from Mistydawn

Exceptional

I had a feeling this wasn't going to go well when. Hopefully the Breedline's will be able to save them, save the girl. Knowing what they're up against, maybe they don't want to. She could very easily be a hybrid. Your story is well-written, very interesting start to finish. Like always, I look forward to reading more.

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020

Thanks so much, Mistydawn :)

Yes indeed, it turned out more difficult than the Breedline thought when searching for Joseph's history at the institute. They got more than they bargained for. Stay tuned... more Breedline adventures to come!
Thanks for following my story. Your feedback means a lot to me. It gives me the motivation I need to keep on going.

Wishing you and your family a safe & happy Christmas!
Hugs from Arkansas,
Shana :)

reply by Mistydawn on 23-Dec-2020

I didn't realize you live in Arkansas. I live in Missouri. Not far from the Arkansas, Missouri state line.
I hope you have a very Merry Christmas too.

reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020

That is close! Too cool! Maybe some day our paths will cross. :)

reply by Mistydawn on 23-Dec-2020

Maybe. We might have in passing and not even realized it. I visit my mom in Berryville often. I lived there and in Harrison briefly.

reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020

That is so odd. I've been to Harrison a lot. :)

Comment from justafan

Exceptional

This has grown leaps and bounds since I last read anything in the series. Bravo, sweetie. This is amazing! I am hungry for more.
I have been reading little novella's of shifter romance and NOTHING I have read compares to this.

Brilliant!!

Always
Justafan of yours
Missy

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020

Wow!!! I'm grinning after reading your review. This is so motivating to hear. I'm hoping some day my books take off. I love to share my Breedline stories with everyone. They are like my pretend little family. :)

Thanks again!
Hugs,
Shana :)

Comment from royowen

Exceptional

You never seem to run out of options Shana, you have a very fertile imagination, and it's on steroids. And this one has diversified from the last one somewhat. To been to get Jace's beast is definitely a step in the drastic direction. Now it seems the government is involved in these things, which wouldn't surprise, they are always looking for angles to best their supposed enemies. Outstanding episode Shana, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020

Thanks so much my dear friend :)

When my characters talked about searching the institute in hopes on finding some information on Joseph, I pondered on where to take this. For some reason, God takes me on a journey and whispers into my subconscious somehow. I never know how the next chapter is heading, but it always surprises me where it does end up. My faith keeps me strong and confident. Good things are to come.

Wishing you and your family a safe & happy Christmas!
Hugs from Arkansas!
Always your fan & friend,
Shana :)

reply by royowen on 23-Dec-2020

God gave you an amazing ability dear, never think He didn?t, run with it, I think you?re incredibly talented.

reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020

Thank you, dear friend :)

Comment from greyson ernst

Excellent

this is really really impressive i love it the picture is perfect to i love it and as always keep writing and stay safe have a happy happy holiday

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020

Thanks so much, Greyson :)

So thrilled to hear you enjoyed this chapter. I had fun creating it. Looks like the Breedline crew have their work cut out. Stay tuned... more adventures to come!

Wishing you and your family a safe & happy Christmas!
Shana :)

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Shana,

Really good chapter - lots of action and tenses situations - but I'm sorry, I gotta throw a flag on the whole thing. That info was obtained illegally. It could never provide a reason for a search warrant - even WITH the judge's name on the sheet. They'd have to come up with a legit reason (as if they didn't know about that list and the experiments) to go in there.

Good luck!

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020

Thanks Robyn :)

I know my story takes it a little off course. My Breedline crew and the detectives do get away with things the real world would object to. And of course... wolves the size of horses really don't exist. Just in my fantasy world. LOL!

Thanks for always giving me honest, great advice and encouraging feedback.

Wishing you and your family a safe & happy Christmas!
Hugs from Arkansas,
Shana :)

Comment from fm wright

Exceptional

You have packed plenty of action and suspense into this rivoting chapter. The questions and missing information you bring up is sure to keep every reader looking forward to the upcoming chapters. The picture itself is very intriguing. Look forward to your next posting with great interest.

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020

Thanks so much, Faye :)

I'm always pleased to hear you enjoy the action and suspense. I do try to bring it in each chapter to keep not only me, but the reader interested. I do appreciate your support and inspiring words.

Wishing you and your family a safe & happy Christmas!
Hugs from Arkansas,
Shana :)

reply by fm wright on 23-Dec-2020

Hugs to you from Texas,
Faye :))