Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
Viewing comments for Chapter 56 "Yuletide"Musings of an old man -2020
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Comment from MissMerri
Thank you for your cheerful, encouraging, picture of a traditional Christmas like we all want to remember in this very untraditional and rarely cheerful year. I enjoyed this very much and also appreciate your lovely author notes. Thank you for your expressions of gratitude and for the gift of $1.02 also. I'm grateful as well. ;p MM
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2020
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Thank you for your cheerful, encouraging, picture of a traditional Christmas like we all want to remember in this very untraditional and rarely cheerful year. I enjoyed this very much and also appreciate your lovely author notes. Thank you for your expressions of gratitude and for the gift of $1.02 also. I'm grateful as well. ;p MM
Comment Written 23-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2020
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Miss Merri, you are welcome! Your six-stars are appreciated.
Comment from DonandVicki
A very well constructed rictameter that is a joy to read this holiday season. The words in the poem bring out delicious visual images of the Christmas season.
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A very well constructed rictameter that is a joy to read this holiday season. The words in the poem bring out delicious visual images of the Christmas season.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2020
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Thank you and Happy, Happy Christmas eve day!
Comment from flylikeaneagle
JLR: congrats on a beautiful poem. Merry Christmas back at you.
Your poem is colorful and full of cheer. May the Joy of the Lord
be your strength. flylikeaneagle
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JLR: congrats on a beautiful poem. Merry Christmas back at you.
Your poem is colorful and full of cheer. May the Joy of the Lord
be your strength. flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 23-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2020
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Thank you! I am so humbled by your generous six-stars. May your days be filled with the Highest and Best the Master has to offer you today Christmas eve, 2020
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JLR: yours as well. I'm submitting my manuscript of 500 pages this week. Taking a break to celebrate Christmas. We will all have a blessed 2021! nancy
Comment from Wendy G
A beautiful rictameter, a clever formation for poetry, and it seems to suit your theme particularly well. The poem is well-written, celebrating the beautiful traditions and togetherness. Thank you for your greetings, and many blessings to you too.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2020
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A beautiful rictameter, a clever formation for poetry, and it seems to suit your theme particularly well. The poem is well-written, celebrating the beautiful traditions and togetherness. Thank you for your greetings, and many blessings to you too.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2020
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Wendy, May your days be filled with the Highest and Best the Master has to offer you today Christmas eve, 2020
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Thank you so very much. All His gifts are perfect. I am humbled and thankful.
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
A fun poem full of all the things that help make Christmas a favorite time of year, especially for kids. FanStory is a great site, I have enjoyed it for about 10yrs now. Make new friends all the time. Hope you have a wonderful Christmas.
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A fun poem full of all the things that help make Christmas a favorite time of year, especially for kids. FanStory is a great site, I have enjoyed it for about 10yrs now. Make new friends all the time. Hope you have a wonderful Christmas.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2020
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Roxanna, wow! Ten years....that is so very nice to read. May your days be filled with the Highest and Best the Master has to offer you today Christmas eve, 2020
Comment from nomi338
No doubt about it. It is about to go down. Once again, pandemic be damned, the world is about to lose itself in joy and merriment. Gift exchanges, kisses beneath the mistletoe, you name it, it will be going on until the hangover and we have to wake to the cold reality that the world has not changed for the better, we are still knee deep in racial division, a pandemic that seems to be determined not to go away, a president who lost but refuses to accept defeat. It is a shame that Christmas does not last until we find a cure for all of the world's problems.
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No doubt about it. It is about to go down. Once again, pandemic be damned, the world is about to lose itself in joy and merriment. Gift exchanges, kisses beneath the mistletoe, you name it, it will be going on until the hangover and we have to wake to the cold reality that the world has not changed for the better, we are still knee deep in racial division, a pandemic that seems to be determined not to go away, a president who lost but refuses to accept defeat. It is a shame that Christmas does not last until we find a cure for all of the world's problems.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2020
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Nomi, yes the perfect word SHAME. If we could all just cling to the the
Master taught us, many times in scripture:
Mark 12:31 'Love your neighbor as yourself...
Leviticus 19:18 :You shall not take vengeance or bear a grudge against
any of your people, but you shall love your neighbor as yourself:
I am the Lord.
My friend....There is a prerequisite to loving thy neighbor. ?God showed how much he loved us by sending his one and only Son into the world so that we might have eternal life through him. ... But, if we love each other,
God lives in us, and his love is brought to full expression in us.?
Nomi, May you receive the Highest and Best blessing from the Master
for you use for yourself, your loved ones, your ministry and the world we
all seek healing for, JLR
Comment from eliz100
This is a wonderful Christmas poem. It has been such a down year, your poem brings lightness to a dark time. Thank you for sharing your Christmas poem.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
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This is a wonderful Christmas poem. It has been such a down year, your poem brings lightness to a dark time. Thank you for sharing your Christmas poem.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment, Happy Holidays!
Comment from Anne Johnston
A great Christmas greeting. I just joined this site about two months ago and have found everyone is very kind and helpful. What a great place to share our ramblings. Merry Christmas to you and a Happy New Year.
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A great Christmas greeting. I just joined this site about two months ago and have found everyone is very kind and helpful. What a great place to share our ramblings. Merry Christmas to you and a Happy New Year.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2020
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Anne, welcome and I do trust you will fully enjoy the many talented writers, poets and just good wordsmiths on the site. Merry Christmas!
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It seems to be a happy place
Comment from Sanku
Yuletide! with all the upheavals, children screaming and grandmothers tearing it is a very welcome season and we would like it come again and again
Happy Christmas.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
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Yuletide! with all the upheavals, children screaming and grandmothers tearing it is a very welcome season and we would like it come again and again
Happy Christmas.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2020
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Yes we would for certain.
Comment from Pantygynt
You have great shape with this one, like a Chinese lantern, it throws light on the Christmas proceedings. I liked your line 6. That will keep him out of her knickers. He'll be out for the count by 3.00 p.m.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
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You have great shape with this one, like a Chinese lantern, it throws light on the Christmas proceedings. I liked your line 6. That will keep him out of her knickers. He'll be out for the count by 3.00 p.m.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
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Smiling back, friend! Enjoy a pint of two of good cheer and sit by the hearth, not a worry about next year! Here?s to good times and a Happy New Year!
