How To Wrap A Present
I'm all fingers and thumbs when doing this activity.25 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
I can definitely identify with your sense of frustration! In theory the wrapping is done with love and joy .... but the reality, that's often something else! Best wishes for your very good entry in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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I can definitely identify with your sense of frustration! In theory the wrapping is done with love and joy .... but the reality, that's often something else! Best wishes for your very good entry in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Thank you for reviewing. I always end up using yards of tape and it gets on me mostly... and the paper tears too.
Comment from Carlos' girl
cute poem, very relatable..who hasnt got annoyed wrapping the present, dissed it, headed for mal. gift wrapping is a bygone art-form like making fudge, very exact.
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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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cute poem, very relatable..who hasnt got annoyed wrapping the present, dissed it, headed for mal. gift wrapping is a bygone art-form like making fudge, very exact.
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Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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yep... I can't make fudge either!
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neither can i, but mom could do both lol
Comment from Waterfowl
Oh, this is definitely relatable! I struggle to wrap Christmas gifts neatly. I never could manage to match my Mom's skill level.
Maybe you could work on spacing a bit so the poem is easier to follow. Otherwise, it's very good!
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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Oh, this is definitely relatable! I struggle to wrap Christmas gifts neatly. I never could manage to match my Mom's skill level.
Maybe you could work on spacing a bit so the poem is easier to follow. Otherwise, it's very good!
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Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Thanks for reviewing my poem. Could you give me a bit of help please with understanding what you mean about the spacing? Where? Do you mean to make more stanzas instead of the current 4? What is currently difficult to follow?
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When I talked about spacing, I meant spaces between lines. Maybe every four lines you could have a space to separate stanzas.
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That's good advice. The smaller stanzas look better. Thank you.
Comment from Lucy de Welles
Who can't relate to this one? Perfectly written from stem to stern with lovely thread of humor unfolding, evolving and culminating in the perfect solution at the end: a small gift :)
Who hasn't done this? I have!
Sure contest winner here!
Lucy
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Who can't relate to this one? Perfectly written from stem to stern with lovely thread of humor unfolding, evolving and culminating in the perfect solution at the end: a small gift :)
Who hasn't done this? I have!
Sure contest winner here!
Lucy
Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Thanks for your super review. i feel such a klutz when the sticky tape sticks to me instead of the parcel.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Very cute little poem, and so true. I have two left fingers where it come to the delicate art of wrapping -How can I hold the edges down?
I need three hands, not two.
This makes me grumpy, with a frown;
I don't know what to do.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Very cute little poem, and so true. I have two left fingers where it come to the delicate art of wrapping -How can I hold the edges down?
I need three hands, not two.
This makes me grumpy, with a frown;
I don't know what to do.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Thank you for reviewing and for rating my poem so highly. I always end up using yards of tape and it gets on me mostly... and the paper tears too.
