How To Wrap A Present
I'm all fingers and thumbs when doing this activity.25 total reviews
Comment from Goodadvicechan
Wrapping gifts requires techniques. I aways admire how the gift wrappers do it in department store.
Choosing the gift wrap paper isn't easy either. I always think of the person who will receives the gift before I choose the paper.
Good work
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Wrapping gifts requires techniques. I aways admire how the gift wrappers do it in department store.
Choosing the gift wrap paper isn't easy either. I always think of the person who will receives the gift before I choose the paper.
Good work
Comment Written 26-Dec-2020
Comment from Leigh Lawhon
ha really cute and has a nice ending. Some really funny lines like "forgive me - I just swore." and "I bought a diff'rent gift for you, one that is cute and small." is a great twist.
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ha really cute and has a nice ending. Some really funny lines like "forgive me - I just swore." and "I bought a diff'rent gift for you, one that is cute and small." is a great twist.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2020
Comment from RShipp
What a grand picture to go with your poem!
The 'wrapping gift quandary' ... I've been there!
Your meter and rhythm were precise and enjoyable.
A great solution to your problem!
Well done!
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What a grand picture to go with your poem!
The 'wrapping gift quandary' ... I've been there!
Your meter and rhythm were precise and enjoyable.
A great solution to your problem!
Well done!
Comment Written 23-Dec-2020
Comment from lyenochka
Hahaha! That's so cute! Thanks so much for sharing the annoyance of having to gift wrap an oddly-shaped gift. I haven't been to a shopping mall all year so your adventure is quite brave! Best wishes in the contest!
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Hahaha! That's so cute! Thanks so much for sharing the annoyance of having to gift wrap an oddly-shaped gift. I haven't been to a shopping mall all year so your adventure is quite brave! Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 22-Dec-2020
Comment from equestrik
I really like this creative and very funny write alongside the picture you chose to go with it. I think most people can relate to this on some level. Good writing.
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I really like this creative and very funny write alongside the picture you chose to go with it. I think most people can relate to this on some level. Good writing.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2020
Comment from victor 66
I believe Christmas presents are not an issue when it comes to what you wrap or how you wrap, but most important is for whom you wrap. If you give a special person a gift, that makes it special. Happy holidays!
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
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I believe Christmas presents are not an issue when it comes to what you wrap or how you wrap, but most important is for whom you wrap. If you give a special person a gift, that makes it special. Happy holidays!
Comment Written 22-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
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That's true - it will always be the thought that counts, and not the wrapping paper... i.e. it's what's on the inside that matters most.
Comment from Anne Johnston
I really like your poem. There is so much truth in it, wrapping gifts can be hard, but I like the solution you came up with - get it gift wrapped at the mall. Well done.
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I really like your poem. There is so much truth in it, wrapping gifts can be hard, but I like the solution you came up with - get it gift wrapped at the mall. Well done.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2020
Comment from Bill Schott
This Christmas poem, How to Wrap a Present, takes the reader through the trial and error and eventual abandonment of the wrapping challenge. Funny.
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This Christmas poem, How to Wrap a Present, takes the reader through the trial and error and eventual abandonment of the wrapping challenge. Funny.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2020
Comment from sammielwf
Oh Wrapping Fiasco Mystery Writer,
I have a feeling that we have all been there....and done that!
Wrapping or attempting to wrap a present without getting all wrapped up in it.
I liked this little whimsical write and I think I shall vote for it...because it simply made me laugh!
Thank you dear wrapping master.
Sammielwf
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
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Oh Wrapping Fiasco Mystery Writer,
I have a feeling that we have all been there....and done that!
Wrapping or attempting to wrap a present without getting all wrapped up in it.
I liked this little whimsical write and I think I shall vote for it...because it simply made me laugh!
Thank you dear wrapping master.
Sammielwf
Comment Written 22-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
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Thanks for this terrific review - and for your vote. I'm rapt.
Comment from Julie Sandy
A great entry to the competition, I really enjoyed reading it, it made me laugh.
Great rhyme throughout and a very good topic to cover, personally I love wrapping.
Good luck
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A great entry to the competition, I really enjoyed reading it, it made me laugh.
Great rhyme throughout and a very good topic to cover, personally I love wrapping.
Good luck
Comment Written 22-Dec-2020
