What a Turkey !
Under ten words poem33 total reviews
Comment from jake cosmos aller
loved this ten-word two-line poem written from the turkey's point of view liked the last line the best especially muffled beneath my mask! n icely sums up the poem
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
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loved this ten-word two-line poem written from the turkey's point of view liked the last line the best especially muffled beneath my mask! n icely sums up the poem
Comment Written 23-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
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Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from RetroStarfish
Ha! Well done. What a great commentary told in such a few words. I also like the alliteration of "muffled" and "mask". And, yes, sometimes when I hear people trying to talk through their masks it does sound like gobbling.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
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Ha! Well done. What a great commentary told in such a few words. I also like the alliteration of "muffled" and "mask". And, yes, sometimes when I hear people trying to talk through their masks it does sound like gobbling.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
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Thanks for a great review zanya
Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel
This is a clever poem! I like the way you compare the way we all sound with masks on to turkey gobbles. LOL I think you're right - it's often hard to understand what someone is saying. i will be glad when the masks are a thing of the past!
Thank you for sharing,
Susan
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
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This is a clever poem! I like the way you compare the way we all sound with masks on to turkey gobbles. LOL I think you're right - it's often hard to understand what someone is saying. i will be glad when the masks are a thing of the past!
Thank you for sharing,
Susan
Comment Written 22-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
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Thank for reading and sharing - zanya
Comment from Taurus the Elder
Very good. It's hard to review ten words because my review has to be longer then your work. Nice little piece with a cute message supported well by the art work. Great job, good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
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Very good. It's hard to review ten words because my review has to be longer then your work. Nice little piece with a cute message supported well by the art work. Great job, good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
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Thanks for reading and reviewing zanya
Comment from nedgarcss
Good way to point out that these masks can hide most anything, including the upset we feel at having to wear them, among other things. Clever writing!
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
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Good way to point out that these masks can hide most anything, including the upset we feel at having to wear them, among other things. Clever writing!
Comment Written 22-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
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Great review surrounded by 6 bright stars ! thanks zanya
Comment from Teri7
Zanya, This is a very nice and cute Under Ten Competition poem you have penned for the writing prompt contest. You used very good descriptive. and cute words. Best wishes in the contest. love and Merry Christmas! Teri
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
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Zanya, This is a very nice and cute Under Ten Competition poem you have penned for the writing prompt contest. You used very good descriptive. and cute words. Best wishes in the contest. love and Merry Christmas! Teri
Comment Written 22-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
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Thanks for a great review & Happy Christmas to you and yours zanya
Comment from greyson ernst
lol i really really like this and its really detailed to for how short it is but as always keep writing and stay safe have a happy holiday
sincerely Greyson Ernst
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
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lol i really really like this and its really detailed to for how short it is but as always keep writing and stay safe have a happy holiday
sincerely Greyson Ernst
Comment Written 22-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
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Great review & Happy Christmas zanya
Comment from Jeffrey Ford
I think that you wrote a great poem. It is very short and straight to the point. I love how the turkey expressed his first amendment rights. Great poem and good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
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I think that you wrote a great poem. It is very short and straight to the point. I love how the turkey expressed his first amendment rights. Great poem and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 22-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
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Great review zanya
Comment from Vanna1
Ha, yeah. The muffle speech! I feel sorry for the deaf, can't read lips. Funny animal to use cause they are loud. You followed the instructions well. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
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Ha, yeah. The muffle speech! I feel sorry for the deaf, can't read lips. Funny animal to use cause they are loud. You followed the instructions well. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
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Great review zanya
Comment from Ben B.
HAHAHAHAH Now this is funny. Gobbling beneath that mask must be one tricky task for a chicken. Thanks for the laugh and good luck with your contest.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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HAHAHAHAH Now this is funny. Gobbling beneath that mask must be one tricky task for a chicken. Thanks for the laugh and good luck with your contest.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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And thanks again for a superb reveiw and those bright stars zanya
