Poetic Birdsong
Enjoying the musical delight of avian lyrics.18 total reviews
Comment from sammielwf
Lisa,
The singular image of the birds sitting in the tree branches and filling the air with bird song is delightful.
Rhythmical lyrics without words....nicely crafted visual.
Sammielwf
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Lisa,
The singular image of the birds sitting in the tree branches and filling the air with bird song is delightful.
Rhythmical lyrics without words....nicely crafted visual.
Sammielwf
Comment Written 26-Dec-2020
Comment from kmoss
This is cute! I like it. I can hear the birds singing to each other. The title is good and the picture pairs well with it. I'm glad you put a note about the word "poems." Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
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This is cute! I like it. I can hear the birds singing to each other. The title is good and the picture pairs well with it. I'm glad you put a note about the word "poems." Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 22-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
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Thanks for this nice review!
Comment from Bill Schott
This two-line poem, Poetic Birdsong, has the proper formatting and finds the music and rhythm in the feathered friend on the outside limb.
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This two-line poem, Poetic Birdsong, has the proper formatting and finds the music and rhythm in the feathered friend on the outside limb.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2020
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written two-line poem about birds filling the trees in lines while seeking trilling words to write a poem that bring joy to the reader with a mindful picture.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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A very well-written two-line poem about birds filling the trees in lines while seeking trilling words to write a poem that bring joy to the reader with a mindful picture.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Thanks for reviewing!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Poetic birds trilling away here in your two line poem and I wish you luck with the contest and I have no idea how you say poem and make it sound like one syllable! Ha ha ha, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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Poetic birds trilling away here in your two line poem and I wish you luck with the contest and I have no idea how you say poem and make it sound like one syllable! Ha ha ha, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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Americans say 'pome' - what an abuse of language!
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Comment from Lucy de Welles
Positively Trilling 2-line poem contest entry. Subject is light, sweet, cute, airy, pleasant, beloved by all. Perfectly matched artwork adds to the charm, levity, freshness of the text.
Well done!
Lucy
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Positively Trilling 2-line poem contest entry. Subject is light, sweet, cute, airy, pleasant, beloved by all. Perfectly matched artwork adds to the charm, levity, freshness of the text.
Well done!
Lucy
Comment Written 19-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Mary Vigasin
First I love the picture. As winter is closing in here with 14" of snow, the brightness and image of your words is refreshing.
Thanks for the taste of Spring.
Regards
Mary
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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First I love the picture. As winter is closing in here with 14" of snow, the brightness and image of your words is refreshing.
Thanks for the taste of Spring.
Regards
Mary
Comment Written 19-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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We are in warm weather here, and my plum tree is fruiting, so there are many birds around.
Comment from Wendy G
What a lovely idea! And capturing two rhymes per line in a two line poem -so very well done. The poetry of nature, and its beauty, don't need words, just eyes and ears. Thanks and good wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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What a lovely idea! And capturing two rhymes per line in a two line poem -so very well done. The poetry of nature, and its beauty, don't need words, just eyes and ears. Thanks and good wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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We are in warm weather here, and my plum tree is fruiting, so there are many birds around. Thanks for your comments about my poem.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Nice bit of whimsy--I am relieved not to see an orange-headed thrush tweeting amidst the company of these more developed birdbrains who know that "poem" has two syllables.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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Nice bit of whimsy--I am relieved not to see an orange-headed thrush tweeting amidst the company of these more developed birdbrains who know that "poem" has two syllables.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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Haha... you Americans need to pronounce 'poems' correctly as the 2-syllable word it is.
Hopefully that orange bird brain will soon be a dodo.
Comment from Boogienights
You have written about my favorite...birds. They are so lovely and graceful, thier songs make me so happy. A very nice image that you included...Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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You have written about my favorite...birds. They are so lovely and graceful, thier songs make me so happy. A very nice image that you included...Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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We are in warm weather here, and my plum tree is fruiting, so there are many birds around. Thanks for your comments about my poem.
