I am Diamond.Diamonds Have Flaws
They who search for perfection search forever...4 total reviews
Comment from w.j.debi
I like the humor of your verse as you list what others might consider your flaws if given a chance to voice them. Your notes are funny as well.
The rhyming is good. You are an excellent storyteller.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
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I like the humor of your verse as you list what others might consider your flaws if given a chance to voice them. Your notes are funny as well.
The rhyming is good. You are an excellent storyteller.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
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Nice to know somebody liked my tale! It was fun to write. If you like my story telling, I'd be honored if you would look at "Of Mountains and Women and Life" in my portfolio. It will make you laugh since you like humor. Anyway, thanks and Merry Christmas!
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Sounds like this man is a Pisces. It describes two I know. Easy going, Moves slowly. Daydreamer. Easily distracted. Hard worker. You did a god job of developing your character.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Sounds like this man is a Pisces. It describes two I know. Easy going, Moves slowly. Daydreamer. Easily distracted. Hard worker. You did a god job of developing your character.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Taurus. "Full of bull". Thanks for your great review. This one was particularly fun to write. My wife had several items she wanted to include, but I was able to complete the poem and submit it while she was shopping.
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lol
Comment from Gloria ....
Of course the prompt was written by a woman in an attempt to make men admit their flaws. But you did not fall for that bait, not one little bit. Just a few wee zips like golfing rather than doing chores, the toilet seat routine and not too much at all. LOL
Great job author. I truly enjoyed your humour and written in good metre and rhyme too.
Good luck in the booths. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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Of course the prompt was written by a woman in an attempt to make men admit their flaws. But you did not fall for that bait, not one little bit. Just a few wee zips like golfing rather than doing chores, the toilet seat routine and not too much at all. LOL
Great job author. I truly enjoyed your humour and written in good metre and rhyme too.
Good luck in the booths. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 18-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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Ah-Ha! I salute your humility to admit that you've been caught! Thank you for stopping by and your admission of guilt, er, nice review. This one was extra fun to write, partly in anticipation of exactly your review! Merry Christmas
Comment from Lucy de Welles
Great take on personal flaws from a variety of close, personal viewpoints. Love the levity evoked by the cartoon and by the color choice of orange on black. Blue and green always contrast well with orange.
Solid contest entry!
Well done!
Lucy
Title:
I am a Diamond.(put a space here)Diamonds have flaws(!) or (.)
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2020
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Great take on personal flaws from a variety of close, personal viewpoints. Love the levity evoked by the cartoon and by the color choice of orange on black. Blue and green always contrast well with orange.
Solid contest entry!
Well done!
Lucy
Title:
I am a Diamond.(put a space here)Diamonds have flaws(!) or (.)
Comment Written 18-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2020
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Out of spaces. None for Diamond. But rather than shorten the message, I stayed with the point. This was Fun Fling on a Friday night - shows you where my social life is at! But, what do I need? Gimme a nice, sassy but not obtrusive box wine, a laptop and a relevant prompt, I can party! Thanks for stopping by!
