Maradona
Enjoy This 8 Line Acrostic Poem.130 total reviews
Comment from Jeffrey Ford
I think that you wrote a great and beautiful tribute to the great soccer player Maradona. It is a very wonderful tribute. Thank you for sharing this poem!
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I think that you wrote a great and beautiful tribute to the great soccer player Maradona. It is a very wonderful tribute. Thank you for sharing this poem!
Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
Comment from Carlos' girl
Awesome poem here, you kick it, no pun intended. Great theme that is super well-written, gives good neat details and tells a story like a little biography. Love it.
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Awesome poem here, you kick it, no pun intended. Great theme that is super well-written, gives good neat details and tells a story like a little biography. Love it.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
Maradona's life was cut far too short. I was only born a year before him, but already I am outliving my more skilled contempoaries - there is something wrong here. In years to come we will be glad of this factual reminder. Thank you.
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Maradona's life was cut far too short. I was only born a year before him, but already I am outliving my more skilled contempoaries - there is something wrong here. In years to come we will be glad of this factual reminder. Thank you.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
Comment from Lucy de Welles
Subject is warm, exciting, and culturally interesting. Photo is pleasing to the eyes and expresses the subject's delight in the game that he loves and in the winning of it. His dreams have come true. His joy is complete with our delight mirrored in his face.
Who doesn't love a great game of soccer!!??
Well done!
Lucy
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Subject is warm, exciting, and culturally interesting. Photo is pleasing to the eyes and expresses the subject's delight in the game that he loves and in the winning of it. His dreams have come true. His joy is complete with our delight mirrored in his face.
Who doesn't love a great game of soccer!!??
Well done!
Lucy
Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
Comment from Goodadvicechan
The author uses the letters of MARADONA to write the bio of Maradona. He has done an excellent job.
Throughout eight sentences, he was able to show his birth date and his death date.
At the same time, he glories his achievement as a famous worldwide football star.
Excellent job
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The author uses the letters of MARADONA to write the bio of Maradona. He has done an excellent job.
Throughout eight sentences, he was able to show his birth date and his death date.
At the same time, he glories his achievement as a famous worldwide football star.
Excellent job
Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
Comment from Taurus the Elder
Very good. I like learning new things and this piece on the soccer star was interesting. Technically sound, good story line, supported well by the art work. Great job, good luck in the contest.
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Very good. I like learning new things and this piece on the soccer star was interesting. Technically sound, good story line, supported well by the art work. Great job, good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2020
Comment from Alchera
A well written uncomplete maradonian acrostic.
all Naples'football team is missing. He won two Italian football competitions with the Napoli team and the stadium is now called Diego Armando Maradona and no longer San Paolo and I am a Napolitano fan.
Great job!
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A well written uncomplete maradonian acrostic.
all Naples'football team is missing. He won two Italian football competitions with the Napoli team and the stadium is now called Diego Armando Maradona and no longer San Paolo and I am a Napolitano fan.
Great job!
Comment Written 19-Dec-2020
Comment from Susan Larson
What a very nice tribute to this Brazilian soccer player. You told his story in a very succinct way in this acrostic poem. It would be wonderful if you could get this poem into the hands of his family.
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What a very nice tribute to this Brazilian soccer player. You told his story in a very succinct way in this acrostic poem. It would be wonderful if you could get this poem into the hands of his family.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2020
Comment from Rubypond
I took your notes and request to heart and tried to leave off any flowery stuff. I see that you are looking for pointed critique. So, I've never been a fan of the acrostic form. Possibly because of the difficulty of metering. That being said, you took the task at hand and did it. So, I like the way that you rhymed the last four lines though I'm not sure if it was intentional nor necessary considering there is not much room for metering within the context of the form. So, trying to come up with a helpful suggestion, (which is what I like and what I think you are looking for is to possibly see if you can get a little meter to fit in there. Hope this was helpful..
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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I took your notes and request to heart and tried to leave off any flowery stuff. I see that you are looking for pointed critique. So, I've never been a fan of the acrostic form. Possibly because of the difficulty of metering. That being said, you took the task at hand and did it. So, I like the way that you rhymed the last four lines though I'm not sure if it was intentional nor necessary considering there is not much room for metering within the context of the form. So, trying to come up with a helpful suggestion, (which is what I like and what I think you are looking for is to possibly see if you can get a little meter to fit in there. Hope this was helpful..
Comment Written 19-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from Mastery
Very nice acrostic tribute to this champion, my friend. You incorporated so much about him in such a meaningful way. One can certainly learn a lot about him just from the lines in this wonderful writing. Merry Christmas, my friend. Bob
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Very nice acrostic tribute to this champion, my friend. You incorporated so much about him in such a meaningful way. One can certainly learn a lot about him just from the lines in this wonderful writing. Merry Christmas, my friend. Bob
Comment Written 19-Dec-2020
