Exit Speech
Resurrected from two years ago36 total reviews
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
This seems a good time to resurrect this piece, as it looks very much like he will run again.
I found this to be a very well written piece of satire, and writing his his voice (no, I can't even say his name) makes it even better. And although I know you're trying to get YOUR points across, this man doesn't have the intelligence to put some of these scenarios into play. He understands manipulation in order to get what he wants, and not much more.
The ending confused me a little - he goes from being a menace to being concerned about the nation?
I need to read Henry Wallace.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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This seems a good time to resurrect this piece, as it looks very much like he will run again.
I found this to be a very well written piece of satire, and writing his his voice (no, I can't even say his name) makes it even better. And although I know you're trying to get YOUR points across, this man doesn't have the intelligence to put some of these scenarios into play. He understands manipulation in order to get what he wants, and not much more.
The ending confused me a little - he goes from being a menace to being concerned about the nation?
I need to read Henry Wallace.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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Many thanks
Comment from susand3022
Hello Cogitator, color me confused...
I think I'm hearing one line of Donnie Dearest's BS, then at the bottom... they're friends? lololol Not in a billion years, I don't think. Yes, that's Billion, with a B, even after taxes! ;) (isn't that some wishful Powerball thinking!)
This was a fun read, the January 6th hearings were more fun to watch... ;) I'd love to be there when Donnie Dump Truck gets to take the hot seat though. I'm pretty sure Pride will go before the fall that day! After all... Nobody was there to shoot him. Everybody LOVES him! (eyes rolling toward the ceiling here!)
Susan :)
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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Hello Cogitator, color me confused...
I think I'm hearing one line of Donnie Dearest's BS, then at the bottom... they're friends? lololol Not in a billion years, I don't think. Yes, that's Billion, with a B, even after taxes! ;) (isn't that some wishful Powerball thinking!)
This was a fun read, the January 6th hearings were more fun to watch... ;) I'd love to be there when Donnie Dump Truck gets to take the hot seat though. I'm pretty sure Pride will go before the fall that day! After all... Nobody was there to shoot him. Everybody LOVES him! (eyes rolling toward the ceiling here!)
Susan :)
Comment Written 06-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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Many thanks
Comment from Mariana Convery
This is profoundly written. I love that Trump is the narrator with such purposeful use of irony. The long history written so concisely yet with so few words is extraordinary.
Really fabulous job. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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This is profoundly written. I love that Trump is the narrator with such purposeful use of irony. The long history written so concisely yet with so few words is extraordinary.
Really fabulous job. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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Many thanks
Comment from royowen
To write interpretive first person comments are difficult to do, mainly bacaudevwe can't really be in someone's head thinking as they think, speaking as they speak, but we can certainly surmise what could be said, and this seems to be, what I would think he would say, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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To write interpretive first person comments are difficult to do, mainly bacaudevwe can't really be in someone's head thinking as they think, speaking as they speak, but we can certainly surmise what could be said, and this seems to be, what I would think he would say, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 05-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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Thanks Roy
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Most welcome
Comment from Annmuma
Excellent piece of satire. Beautifully written and thought-provoking from all sides. I find it hard to believe that our country is a split down the middle as it appears to be. I suppose we will get an inkling next week when the vote is taken. I am not sure where too many of us lost sight of what is actually important in life and the basic necessities of keeping a democracy healthy. Lying has become 'okay' -- even if your children stand next to you!!!!! Thanks for reviving this piece. Americans need to stop, think and remember it is totally up to us what we do with our country and our freedoms. When money becomes king, then we all become pawns. ann
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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Excellent piece of satire. Beautifully written and thought-provoking from all sides. I find it hard to believe that our country is a split down the middle as it appears to be. I suppose we will get an inkling next week when the vote is taken. I am not sure where too many of us lost sight of what is actually important in life and the basic necessities of keeping a democracy healthy. Lying has become 'okay' -- even if your children stand next to you!!!!! Thanks for reviving this piece. Americans need to stop, think and remember it is totally up to us what we do with our country and our freedoms. When money becomes king, then we all become pawns. ann
Comment Written 05-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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You got it
Comment from Tom Horonzy
It took me awhile to identify who was talking through this piece. I might be slowing down as age catches up. I find it strange so few (minor groups)
can reverse the will and need of the masses simply by having a rigged media lean in one direction.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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It took me awhile to identify who was talking through this piece. I might be slowing down as age catches up. I find it strange so few (minor groups)
can reverse the will and need of the masses simply by having a rigged media lean in one direction.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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Many thanks...John
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Problems, disadvantages and people and their crooked words, comments, insensible word throwing have been evident in today's living; this is a good work, there is need of national conscience in the world politics and country's political activation; how easy has been hurting others today; people forget civility, sensibility, respecting others is now off the style of living, who cares, what and why; all are ready to speak words; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Problems, disadvantages and people and their crooked words, comments, insensible word throwing have been evident in today's living; this is a good work, there is need of national conscience in the world politics and country's political activation; how easy has been hurting others today; people forget civility, sensibility, respecting others is now off the style of living, who cares, what and why; all are ready to speak words; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)
Comment Written 04-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Many thanks...John
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
You are really good a bringing out the personality of a certain someone. The thing is he still has a lot of people convinced he is really god on earth. I don't think they will recognize him for what he is. Thanks for speaking my thoughts. Although, has he had 4 wives? I can only think of 3.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
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You are really good a bringing out the personality of a certain someone. The thing is he still has a lot of people convinced he is really god on earth. I don't think they will recognize him for what he is. Thanks for speaking my thoughts. Although, has he had 4 wives? I can only think of 3.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
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Thank you much...John (It is 3)
Comment from Wayne Fowler
The only reason not to award the sixth star was my delayed cognition of satire.
What can be more important than making money? - Uh... just about everything of eternal consequence?
That means the dollar comes first when making decisions. - Does not naturally follow the preceding argument.
This is when my density broke.
Good work.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
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The only reason not to award the sixth star was my delayed cognition of satire.
What can be more important than making money? - Uh... just about everything of eternal consequence?
That means the dollar comes first when making decisions. - Does not naturally follow the preceding argument.
This is when my density broke.
Good work.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
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Thank you much...John
Comment from Bill Schott
I can see this is fiction when one has to suspend disbelief to think Trump knows something beyond tax fraud, dying with the lie of the con, and how to take a compliment.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
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I can see this is fiction when one has to suspend disbelief to think Trump knows something beyond tax fraud, dying with the lie of the con, and how to take a compliment.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
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Thank you much...John
