Comment from justafan

Exceptional

Glad I'm on the ground floor with this story. It's going to be a hit, I just know it. Well done again, my lovely friend. Just when I think your stories can't get any better ...BAM, they do!!

Love it
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020

Thanks so much, Missy :)

So thrilled your enjoyed this chapter. I had fun creating it. I think this book is my favorite so far. The new characters are exciting to write about, especially Joseph and the Shadow.

Glad to hear from you! Your feedback is so inspiring. I appreciate each and every word!
Wishing you and your family a safe & happy Christmas!
Hugs from Arkansas,
Shana :)

Comment from AJ McCall

Excellent

I"m more than glad that they're going to help Amy and Martha. That was funny that Jena told Amy she could already stay at her house when Nicholas and Alexender were talking about the same thing. And knowing these places are real is so devastating. I've actually lived in a place like that for some time with my family, even a hotel room for a whole year which isn't suited for six people, lol. I have a feeling those two guys have something to do with Martha's bruised eye, OR I could be wrong. Just a guess. :)

Also, I appreciate you - REALLY - for not describing the skin color of the two men. I'm dark-skinned so I know when people write about drug dealers, criminals, etc. my culture is usually the one who portrays them.

But THANK YOU. I liked this chapter very much. I can't wait to read the next one!! Wish I had six stars!!! (Lastly, I really liked the photo of the wolf in the woods. That's AWESOME.)

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020

Thank you, AJ :)

Your feedback is so motivating. It's rewarding to get great and helpful feedback. I do enjoy writing feel good scenes, especially when it has kiddos in it. I think little Amy just might fit in with my Breedline family. I have an idea where this may go later in the story.

The guy who attacked Martha is dead. Jena took care of him in another chapter. Martha and Amy were kidnapped and Jena saved them. The two drug dealers in this chapter were just coincidence. I get what you mean by people automatically discriminating against skin color. Although, those guys that I described as drug dealers... I saw as white. It's a shame that some people are the way they are. I can promise you, I love everyone for who they are, no matter the race, religion, rich or poor. I'm from Arkansas, so I see criminals in this area as white trash. LOL!
Thanks for all your support and glad you also liked the photos.

Have a great day!
Hugs,
Shana :)

reply by AJ McCall on 21-Dec-2020

White trash? LOL. You're welcome, Shana! Have a lovely night!!!!

Comment from Mistydawn

Exceptional

You told me about this one last week, and you are right. It is very emotional. I hope the mother agrees. Your chapter is very well-written interesting from start to finish. Your characters are realistic, and the dialogue natural. Like always, I look forward to reading more.

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2020

Thank you, Mistydawn :)

So happy you enjoyed the chapter as much as I enjoyed writing it. Actually, it was you that made me write this one. I was going to write off Martha and Amy's character, but after your comment about you thinking they were going to be back in my story, I decided to do exactly that. Thank you for giving me the idea. I think they just might have a storyline here.

I appreciate you! Thanks again.
Hugs,
Shana :)

Comment from greyson ernst

Excellent

this is a awesome picture and poem well good luck and as always keep writing and stay safe have a happy holiday


sincerely Greyson Ernst

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2020

Thank you, Greyson :)

Glad you enjoyed the chapter and the pictures. Come back again. I have more Breedline adventures to come!

Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This chapter of the novel speaks about saving a kidnapped girl, put in a nice taletelling, progressed through balanced plot development, fostered by realistic dialogues, ends with a happy news; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2020

Thank you, Alcreator :)

It's nice to hear your feedback and kind words. I do look forward to your opinion. Thanks for reading my chapter.

Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from royowen

Exceptional

What a lovely episode Shana, my heart is with these children, they are of great value to God. No child should live in poverty and deprivation, starving as if there's not enough food to go around. I like this episode, it has the depth of emotion that I have for these children and there deprived mums. Beautifully written dear friend, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2020

Thank you, Roy :)

I was hoping you would enjoy this chapter. I just love helping others and this gave me a chance to give hope to readers that love still exists even in books. I think Martha and little Amy might have a storyline in my Breedline adventures.

Thanks so much!
Always your fan,
Shana :)

reply by royowen on 16-Dec-2020

I hope so too Shana, you?re an awesome writer my friend.

Comment from fm wright

Exceptional

You instantly had me into the story with your characters and descriptive scenes. I like how you brought out more about the characters. The pictures look as if they were made for this particular chapter. It read so smoothly and I could find no mistakes. Very well done.

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2020

Thank you so much, Faye :)

I was actually going to write off Martha and Amy's character and leave them where it ended when Jena saved them. But a reader wanted to hear more about them, so it gave me an idea. They seemed to fit so well into the storyline. And maybe, just maybe, they might appear again.

Thanks for all your kind words and support!
Hugs,
Shana :)

reply by fm wright on 16-Dec-2020

I hope you do incorporate Marthaand Amy into the story more fully.
Hugs,
Faye