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Chochee Medina Life and Times

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Comment from greyson ernst
Excellent
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this is a awesome story i have no suggestions and as always keep writing and stay safe have a happy holiday


sincerely Greyson Ernst

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2020
    Thank you for the Time to Read, Rate and Review it. I'm Wondering if you found it a fictional or non-fiction piece?
Comment from sammielwf
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Could this really happen you ask? Why not! In the world in which we live in today people fight over just about anything.
Would I advise getting a little "in the cups" and choosing to fight with four other guys? Probably not- but as I said at the beginning of this review- this is 2020 the year of crazy stuff happening all the time.
The story was an interesting throw back with the cord phone though. I do remember them from my high school days in Maine. You could twirl the cord around your hand and wrist and only walk so far as you talked- forgetting that cord meant being jerked back into reality very quickly!
Sammielwf

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2020
    Thank you for your Time to Review and Rate this true story piece.