The Call of Nature
When no man speaks2 total reviews
Comment from kiwisteveh
Hi, Judy.
I'm afraid I can't take your pretty poem seriously because of the title. The 'call of nature' almost invariably refers to the need to go to the toilet - not what your poem is about.
I guess your use of silence was deliberate, even though you also mention sounds and voices. As I write this I hear plenty of nature's voices (you need an apostrophe BTW) and they're not silent!
Steve
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Hi, Judy.
I'm afraid I can't take your pretty poem seriously because of the title. The 'call of nature' almost invariably refers to the need to go to the toilet - not what your poem is about.
I guess your use of silence was deliberate, even though you also mention sounds and voices. As I write this I hear plenty of nature's voices (you need an apostrophe BTW) and they're not silent!
Steve
Comment Written 21-Jan-2021
Comment from Ulla
Hi Judy, good to see you posting. I liked your 5-7-5 poem which is beautifully written. I really liked it and I could almost here the voices of the wind. A great entry and good luck. Ulla:)))
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Hi Judy, good to see you posting. I liked your 5-7-5 poem which is beautifully written. I really liked it and I could almost here the voices of the wind. A great entry and good luck. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 21-Jan-2021
