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Sophia

Acrostic

41 total reviews 
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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Would not have pegged this as acrostic--the giveaway of so many is that they come across as forced into the form. Fresh opener--robber of your heart--ending with hers of gold ... she should be wary of those who would steal it.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
    Thank you for the lovely review and generous compliments, dear Liz. It is so appreciated. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal XOs...
Comment from Sugarray77
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What a lovely granddaughter you have, Sally. She seems to love those gorgeous roses... the girl has good taste! I enjoyed reading this lovely acrostic in tribute to her. Well done and good luck.

Melissa

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
    Thank you dear Melissa. Your review is most kind! Sending you my best today
    Sal XOs....
Comment from lyenochka
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She's lovely like her grandma! Thanks for sharing the well written acrostic poem for Sophia! What a perfect mix of spiritual grace and beauty in your description of her: "Innocent, sweet, and generous... A heart of gold inside."


 Comment Written 07-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
    Aw, you're so sweet. I missed the contest in December but I had to go ahead and post this. I've been missing a lot lately it seems. Sending you my best and many thanks for the lovely review,
    Sal XOs...
Comment from Irish Rain
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Just beautiful.
As is your gorgeous granddaughter!!
Are those roses still blooming?
Awesome.
I love your descriptive and wonderful
acrostic Miss Sally,
blessings...

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
    Thank you for the lovely review and generous compliments, dear Irish Rain! It is greatly appreciated. Sending you my best today as always and blessings for the new year
    Sal XOs...
reply by Irish Rain on 13-Jan-2021
    Just so beautiful!!
Comment from Boogienights
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What a lovely girl, I'll bet you're very proud. From your description she is not only beautiful on the outside but also within. Thanks for sharing this. :)

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
    Thank you very much for the lovely review of my poem. So glad you enjoyed it and my beautiful girl. Sending you my best today and blessings always, Sally XOs
    By the way, congratulations on your honor for recognized writer of the month for January! Well deserved!! :))
Comment from Liz O'Neill
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This is very hopeful. I love when the goodness in our youth is applauded. Your metaphors strongly contribute to your message. Your imagery is vivid. Nicely exressed.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
    Thank you very much for your kind review and compliments. It is so appreciated. Sending along my best to you and yours, Sally XOs...
Comment from Mark D. R.
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Sally,

I don't often review acrostic or long poems, but the exception is made when the name has a meaning for me. In this case my granddaughter's middle name is Sophia. At 8 years old, she is a spunky and wise youngster. She stops to smell the flowers but would likely prefer mountain biking. LOL

Mark

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
    Thank you very much for the lovely review and kind comments. It is so appreciated. Sending you my best today as always, Sally
Comment from Mrs. KT
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Hello Sal!
What a treasure is your granddaughter!
And your Acrostic is as well!
I always tease Yvette (Y.M.Roger) that my attempts at acrostic are abysmal; they are!
But yours flows well and certainly conveys the love you hold for your granddaughter!

Thank you for sharing!
diane

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
    Thank you very much for the beautiful review and kind compliments, dear Diane. It is so appreciated. Sending you my best today as always, Sally XOs......
Comment from Raul1
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I think that this is your daughter. What a wonderful dedicated poem for her. She is special in your heart. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
    Thank you for the wonderful review and kind compliments. It is greatly appreciated. Sending along my best to you and yours,
    Sally :))
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
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What a lovely poem you've written, for your beautiful granddaughter! The entire poem is perfect and shows your love for her, and your pride in your sweet grandchild. My favorite line:
"Has each new day in her grasp."
And it's wonderful to know that she's as beautiful on the inside, as she is on the outside.
What a gorgeous picture! Does she live down south where you are? It looks like summer, all year round! She's prettier than the roses!

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
    Thank you for the lovely review and kind compliments, dear Mary Kay. It is so appreciated and needed. She is a beauty in every way. She loves flowers and always stops to smell the roses. Sending my best today as always, Sally XOs...xo....
reply by Mary Kay Bonfante on 14-Jan-2021
    You're very welcome, dear Sally. How absolutely lovely! God bless you, Sophia and your whole family.
    - Mary Kay xoxo