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Sophia

Acrostic

41 total reviews 
Comment from Sumpta
Exceptional
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I really enjoyed reading it while I smiled at how beautiful God has made Sophia to be. The joy gotten from lovely and innocent children is out of this world. Well done Sal.

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
    Thank you for the beautiful review and generous stars, dear Sumpta. I'm so honored! Sophia is a beautiful girl inside and out. Sending you my best and blessings always,
    Sal XOs...
Comment from Cindy Warren
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I guessed that the little heart-stealer was your granddaughter right away. She's adorable. Grandkids are amazing, aren't they? Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
    Aw, thank you! She really is a sweetheart in every aspect. Thank you for the super kimd review! Sending you my best today as always
    Sal XOs....
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for this wonderful acrostic poem about your granddaughter. It's as beautiful as I am sure she is. I can tell she's a special little girl. Thank you for sharing this with us.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
    Thank you very much for the wonderful review of my acrostic poem. My granddaughter really is very special and beautiful inside and out. Thank you, again! Sending along my best to you and yours, Sally XOs....
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
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A beautiful acrostic poem that is dripping with love for your granddaughter! I am sure that Sophia must be a loving reminder of what you were at her aga!:):) Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021
    Thank you for the lovely review and kind compliments. Both mean so much. Sending my best and blessings always,
    Sal :))
Comment from Bill Schott
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This acrostic poem, Sophia, follows the vertical, first-letter theme and gives the reader loving sketch of your granddaughter. Favorite line: "Has each new day in her grasp."

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
    Thank you for the very kind review of my poem. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Sending my best and as always, dear Bill. Sally :) xo
Comment from Father Flaps
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Hi Sally,
How old is your granddaughter? She looks about the same age as my Alyssa, who just turned 7 on December 16th. She's in Grade 2 at Island View School. I take her to school each morning for 8:05am, and pick her up at 1:25pm. I call her "Lissie" and she calls me "Papa".
You've written a nice acrostic for Sophia.
I especially like "the robber of my heart"
I wish these days would last, but before you know it, she'll be 17 and I'll be 80.
Nice picture!
Thanks for sharing! And Good Luck in the contest!
Hugs,
Kimbob

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
    Thank you very much for the beautiful review and kind comments. Yes, Sophia and Lissie are almost the same age. Sophia will be seven in April. She is tall like me and looks a little older. I can hardly grasp 10 years from now! Sending you my best today as always
    Sal XOs...
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
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Hello Sally, this is a lovely acrostic poem, written true to form. Good use of good metaphor in three of your six lines - an achievement - 'Sophia, the robber of my heart,' - line one, I particularly like. Gorgeous picture of Sophia. A charming acrostic - good luck in the contest. Love Dorothy xxx

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
    Thank you, dear Dorothy. I'm so glad you enjoyed this. She is a beautiful child inside and out. Sending you my best today as always
    Sal XOs....
Comment from WalkerMan
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Sal, this is a delightful tribute to your sweet granddaughter, whose innocent loveliness resembles your own at that age (based on a picture of you in your teens with Jackson). May she one day find as strong and lasting unconditional love from a truly caring man as you did. Superb, and beautifully illustrated by your photo of her.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
    Thank you for the beautiful review and generous stars. I'm so honored and blessed, Mike. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal :))
reply by WalkerMan on 09-Jan-2021
    You are most welcome, Sal. "Lovely" suits both her and your post. :))
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
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Hello Sally.

You did a great job lining up all of your wording as an acrostic and Sofia looks wonderful testing the flower with her nose.

They are all heart robbers at that age and I believe they know it.

Z

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
    Thank you for the lovely review, dear Z! Greatly appreciated. Sending you my best,
    Sal :))
reply by Robert Zimmerman on 09-Jan-2021
    You're welcome Sal.

    Z
Comment from patcelaw
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This is a beautiful acrostic for the contest to honor Sophia. She is a darling child and I see how she stole your hear.
Patricia

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
    Thank you for the lovely review, dear Pat.
    All my best
    Sal XOs.....