Comment from Waterfowl

Exceptional

That picture choice was impressive. Did Rudolph get LED implants?

As for the poem, every stanza rhymes! I still need more practice to get that kind of skill! Kudos to our outcast reindeer for his dedication and you for your writing skills!

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2020

Thank you for such a generous review and for the 6 shiny stars.

Been writing just over two years now ... I like the 5-7-5 format and I do try to make lines rhyme when it?s allowed

My closing line was going to be :

Gifts galore, in store ( on the way I mean ... it?s a saying )

but then a friend said to go for the triple rhyme.

I had no idea there were so many formats in poetry .. ( biggrin)

I checked your portfolio ..you are a new member so .. welcome waterfowl!

Even if I don?t score in the contest , your review and 6 star vote put a smile on my face .

Thank you

Keep safe!

Comment from LeftHandedScribe

Excellent

For anyone who loves this famous underdog, I think you have a winner in this little piece. I was really touched at the end. The photo is also a little eerie which reflects the virus and its unknown nature.

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2020

I chose the pic even for that reason .. I didn?t want to go too merry ..

... even if out hero is determinate that this virus is not going to disrupted Christmas ..

Keep safe !