Obsolete
Now in a museum.12 total reviews
Comment from Julie Sandy
Great poem for the Rudolf competition, it really fits the prompt.
It's very clever and funny, it says a lot in 3 lines.
Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
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Great poem for the Rudolf competition, it really fits the prompt.
It's very clever and funny, it says a lot in 3 lines.
Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 22-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful review.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This one must have a 6! You have made excellent use of your seventeen syllables in this clever, amusing poem about poor Rudolf becoming obsolete! Who's next, the Easter Bunny? LOL!
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
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This one must have a 6! You have made excellent use of your seventeen syllables in this clever, amusing poem about poor Rudolf becoming obsolete! Who's next, the Easter Bunny? LOL!
Comment Written 21-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
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Your six star rating made my day, thanks so much.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the gps installed, put Rudolph's the leading reindeer's of many years, on the line and may lose his job.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the gps installed, put Rudolph's the leading reindeer's of many years, on the line and may lose his job.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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He is ready for retirement.lol. Thanks for your review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This sounds a bit sad as light's out means early to bed or there are no Christmas lights and I expect there is some sadness this Christmas as we can't celebrate it as we used to, a melancholy write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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This sounds a bit sad as light's out means early to bed or there are no Christmas lights and I expect there is some sadness this Christmas as we can't celebrate it as we used to, a melancholy write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
Nicely written 5-7-5 about rudolf. This year's Santa sleigh has that gps I guess its lights out for me. Very cute photo of Santa Claus and rudolf. Well done.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Nicely written 5-7-5 about rudolf. This year's Santa sleigh has that gps I guess its lights out for me. Very cute photo of Santa Claus and rudolf. Well done.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Boogienights
Poor Rudolph! Well at least he'll get a nice rest...maybe play some reindeer games? That's a cute picture you included, and a very amusing verse. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Poor Rudolph! Well at least he'll get a nice rest...maybe play some reindeer games? That's a cute picture you included, and a very amusing verse. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Thank you for your review, I came in third.
Comment from Goodadvicechan
This is creative poem using G-P-S as three ... and Santa has ...
Lights out will bring Christmas atmosphere. Again another credit for the author.
I like this poem.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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This is creative poem using G-P-S as three ... and Santa has ...
Lights out will bring Christmas atmosphere. Again another credit for the author.
I like this poem.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful review.
Comment from Mark D. R.
very funny entry for this contest
those poor reindeer are now sidelined, out of work, and not because of the virus
an alternative ending:
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has G-P-S; I guess for
me, it's a night off!
Good luck in the contest.
Mark
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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very funny entry for this contest
those poor reindeer are now sidelined, out of work, and not because of the virus
an alternative ending:
....
has G-P-S; I guess for
me, it's a night off!
Good luck in the contest.
Mark
Comment Written 19-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from royowen
What an excellent entry in this 5/7/5 poetry contest my friend, this is beautifully written, the poem could only be written in these latter days. Super entry, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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What an excellent entry in this 5/7/5 poetry contest my friend, this is beautifully written, the poem could only be written in these latter days. Super entry, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 19-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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Thank you for your review, it means so much.
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Most welcome
Comment from sammielwf
Now this little contest entry was right on the mark...it was headed in the right direction...it is right on course....
Santa has upgraded to a GPS.....but Rudolph is still the Real deal....go Rudy.
Fun idea- a Santa with a GPS.
Sammielwf
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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Now this little contest entry was right on the mark...it was headed in the right direction...it is right on course....
Santa has upgraded to a GPS.....but Rudolph is still the Real deal....go Rudy.
Fun idea- a Santa with a GPS.
Sammielwf
Comment Written 13-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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Thank you for your review.
