Food Choices
5-7-5 poem about nutrition36 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Nice job with rhyming all the lines of your 5-7-5 and you give us a good nutrition message. I love fruits so that's no problem for me. But what's key for me is the "Plan" verb right in the beginning. I think the cause of poor eating is people don't plan ahead and go for junk food when they are starving. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Nice job with rhyming all the lines of your 5-7-5 and you give us a good nutrition message. I love fruits so that's no problem for me. But what's key for me is the "Plan" verb right in the beginning. I think the cause of poor eating is people don't plan ahead and go for junk food when they are starving. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Thanks for you review and encouraging comments. I'm a member of a weight loss group and the main advice is to plan in order to eat healthy. Thanks for the stars.
Comment from w.j.debi
This is excellent advice. We hear it often, but not often enough since so few people actually follow it. You say it so beautifully, so maybe a few people will take more notice. Eat your fruit!
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2020
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This is excellent advice. We hear it often, but not often enough since so few people actually follow it. You say it so beautifully, so maybe a few people will take more notice. Eat your fruit!
Comment Written 16-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2020
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Thank you for your review and encouraging comments. It's really appreciated. Happy Holidays.
Comment from padumachitta
hello
a good entry for the 575 contest
It is certainly timely advice for the eating season ahead...though with Covid 2020 could have used this tatooed to her forehead.
Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2020
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hello
a good entry for the 575 contest
It is certainly timely advice for the eating season ahead...though with Covid 2020 could have used this tatooed to her forehead.
Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 12-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2020
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Thank you for your review, comments, and well wishes.
Comment from Rx kingpen
Right on. True to form. A subject that is very dear to me these days. My body took a beating after a bad bout with alcohol. I'm taking good care of myself now. Plenty of vegetables, peanuts, and of course, vegetables.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2020
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Right on. True to form. A subject that is very dear to me these days. My body took a beating after a bad bout with alcohol. I'm taking good care of myself now. Plenty of vegetables, peanuts, and of course, vegetables.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2020
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Hi Rx kingpen: I've read some of your work and I am honored you took time to read this simple 5-7-5 poem (my first attempt at this). I too have reasons to be concerned about food choices. Thank you for your evaluation and encouraging comments.
Comment from jenintorre
This is a very good 5-7-5 poem and a good entry for the competition. Your advice is correct, I love fruit so it is easy for me to follow. Very well chosen and mouth watering artwork. Good luck and Best wishes. Jen.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2020
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This is a very good 5-7-5 poem and a good entry for the competition. Your advice is correct, I love fruit so it is easy for me to follow. Very well chosen and mouth watering artwork. Good luck and Best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2020
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Thank you Jen for your encouraging comments, evaluation, and best wishes.
Comment from Anne Johnston
Your rhyming is good and that is great advice on nutrition. Healthy eating is not hard, just watch what you choose. Hope you do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2020
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Your rhyming is good and that is great advice on nutrition. Healthy eating is not hard, just watch what you choose. Hope you do well in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2020
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Thank you Anne for your encouraging comments, review, and well wishes in the contest. I appreciate your reading my poem.
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You are very welcome
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It has a very good chance of winning the contest. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck!
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2020
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It has a very good chance of winning the contest. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck!
Comment Written 11-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2020
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Thank you for your encouraging comments, review and evaluation. Glad you read my poem.
Comment from robyn corum
Lorraine,
Oh, girl. Didn't anyone tell you what time of the year it is? THANKSGIVING? CHRISTMAS?? Ring any bells? Hahahaha! I'm thinking this post might be better heeded AFTER the new year. hahaha
Thanks so much!
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2020
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Lorraine,
Oh, girl. Didn't anyone tell you what time of the year it is? THANKSGIVING? CHRISTMAS?? Ring any bells? Hahahaha! I'm thinking this post might be better heeded AFTER the new year. hahaha
Thanks so much!
Comment Written 11-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2020
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Hi Robyn: If it's not too salty or not too sweet, that leaves almost nothing good to eat. You're right. Thanks for your humorous but true comments. Enjoy your holidays. (Your way) :)
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Food Choices', is short, succinct and delightfully descriptive. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. Good luck with the contest!
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2020
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'Food Choices', is short, succinct and delightfully descriptive. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. Good luck with the contest!
Comment Written 11-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2020
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Thank you for your encouraging comments, review, and best wishes for the contest. Happy holidays.
You're very welcome. I hope you have a Merry Christmas.
the Duchess
Comment from Ben Colder
Now you done it. Made me hungry so I will go raid the Refreg. Good 5-7-5 . Made sense to me. Hope you do well in the contest.
Thanks for sharing. Stay safe .
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2020
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Now you done it. Made me hungry so I will go raid the Refreg. Good 5-7-5 . Made sense to me. Hope you do well in the contest.
Thanks for sharing. Stay safe .
Comment Written 11-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2020
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Hi Ben: Go ahead and raid the fridge. Find something good. Thanks for your encouraging comments, review, and evaluation. Happy holidays.
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You too.
