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Suburban Summer Ghazal

Contest entry - what makes me happy

2 total reviews 
Comment from Wendy G
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A memory of childhood games, has been transformed into this unusual rhyme scheme of poetry. Well done for writing and creative thinking. Best wishes for the contest.

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 10-Dec-2020
    Thank you, Wendy. I laugh every time I see that Geico ad now!
Comment from Charlotte.Penn
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Very very creative. I love how it uses something as trivial as a childrens game to make a poem. Keep writing. This is great work. Thank you so much for sharing.

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 09-Dec-2020
    Thank you! You know, I'm 66 and somehow I still end up playing every summer! I really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.