Lamentations of a Lost Laddy
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Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is a delightful account. I'm glad you've had such a good relationship with your father. I love this thought: "Now I pondered on this, and told myself that whoever would be flying around in the Stars was a lot older than mankind, and had put away with petty squabbling and wars" My mother saw a UFO when she was young. That was around 1925. I have never had the privilege. Several of my friends did & went to get a skeptical friend who had to admit they do exist. This has been fun. Thank you.
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2020
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This is a delightful account. I'm glad you've had such a good relationship with your father. I love this thought: "Now I pondered on this, and told myself that whoever would be flying around in the Stars was a lot older than mankind, and had put away with petty squabbling and wars" My mother saw a UFO when she was young. That was around 1925. I have never had the privilege. Several of my friends did & went to get a skeptical friend who had to admit they do exist. This has been fun. Thank you.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2020
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Thank you yes. I was in Wyoming, and it was around 2 in the morning and I got up and I saw a bright light in the sky is bright as a star and news I was watching you exempt to another part of the sky I felt somehow that they knew I was watching him and I and I knew that they knew and they knew that I knew that they knew.
at any rate, it proceeded to zipper around to a few more places and then get dimmer and dimmer like it was moving anyway at a very high speed.
Thank you so much for your warm, it's always a pleasure to burn your DM. Pondered on this, and came to the conclusion that you are a great friend
Blessings,
Brother Badger Cull
Darren
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Now I know you knew that they knew and they knew that you knew that they knew. Glad to be a friend.
In my book Traffic in my chap 22-24 I give the reader the impression that we're seeing a ufo. We were seeing white lights, & red lights blinking and lights disappearing. **spoiler**
It's actually the fire reflecting in the sky. The fields and brush are on fire.
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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This biographical non-fiction has a good structure of expression about your attitude and nature of your father and you are glad to have conversations with him so freely even today; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2020
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This biographical non-fiction has a good structure of expression about your attitude and nature of your father and you are glad to have conversations with him so freely even today; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 09-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2020
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Thank you so much is good to hear from you again. Thanks for your warm review I do appreciate your comments.
Blessings,
Brother Badger Cull
Darren
Comment from Pantygynt
This promises to be an interesting little autobiography.
A couple of points for your consideration.
'...we were visited by other people's,' This is a possessive apostrophe and not required in a plural as here. Would 'extra-terrestrials' have been a better term than peoples? Thought so.
You need to pay attention to your line breaks and spaces. A line space is needed only at the end of a paragraph. Some of yours come in strange places.
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2020
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This promises to be an interesting little autobiography.
A couple of points for your consideration.
'...we were visited by other people's,' This is a possessive apostrophe and not required in a plural as here. Would 'extra-terrestrials' have been a better term than peoples? Thought so.
You need to pay attention to your line breaks and spaces. A line space is needed only at the end of a paragraph. Some of yours come in strange places.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2020
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A pleasure to hear from you again, thank you so much for the review and the advice. I really appreciate you need tips you able to give me, sometimes I get so excited about him drink some I don't completely first. Thanks again for your comments, I have taken your suggestions and have edited it.
Blessings,
Brother Badger Cull
Darren
