"Cup of Smiles"
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Experiencing Winters Delights"Poetry at his finest.
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Comment from John bailey
Very good writing doc. Rick I love the new snow,it makes me pray for spring. Cherish those memoris because that is all we have.today wll be a memory tomorrow. Love your work.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2020
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Very good writing doc. Rick I love the new snow,it makes me pray for spring. Cherish those memoris because that is all we have.today wll be a memory tomorrow. Love your work.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2020
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I've written a couple really beautiful things about God in the way he dispenses beauty.
But I think the winter time in the first snow expresses it the best!
Thanks for your kind thoughts and review.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Pantygynt
Though this is decidedly weird, with all those question marks that do not follow questions, the overall imagery remains intact.
This one though I was sure involved a typo - that 'a' can't be right.
'The Pureness of that White as a carefully covers all this night!'
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2020
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Though this is decidedly weird, with all those question marks that do not follow questions, the overall imagery remains intact.
This one though I was sure involved a typo - that 'a' can't be right.
'The Pureness of that White as a carefully covers all this night!'
Comment Written 09-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2020
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Why thank you for pointing out the correction or the typo.
But when it comes to the question marks that has to do with a particular writer's style in what he's trying to purvey forward into the reviewer.
Very rarely do I take anything away from anybody's content unless it's terrible and they need to be educated.
As for grammar I never chastise there's Young people here that are learning.
Doctor Ricky 1024.
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Comment from Goodadvicechan
I like snow. I think is beautiful. The poem has a good pint the snow can cover the dark. Life is the same if we let go off the past, we can have a brighter future.
I like "it is a snow day and time to play." This always reminds me of my childhood days and now watching my grand children play.
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2020
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I like snow. I think is beautiful. The poem has a good pint the snow can cover the dark. Life is the same if we let go off the past, we can have a brighter future.
I like "it is a snow day and time to play." This always reminds me of my childhood days and now watching my grand children play.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2020
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I'm so happy that I brought pleasant memories back as you reviewed my beautiful work!
Thanks good advice chan.
Doctor Ricky 1024
