Under The Mistletoad
5-7-5 Christmas good wishes to you all...19 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
Very clever entry for the 5-7-5 competition. The artwork is a great inspiration (or support) for this fun and witty piece. I enjoyed it. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2020
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Very clever entry for the 5-7-5 competition. The artwork is a great inspiration (or support) for this fun and witty piece. I enjoyed it. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2020
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Thank you! I've got my fingers crossed it'll do well.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
He he he, this is a funny post and so appropriate for this contest as this frog enjoys a cup of flies for supper! You made me smile here, much fun, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2020
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He he he, this is a funny post and so appropriate for this contest as this frog enjoys a cup of flies for supper! You made me smile here, much fun, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2020
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Hey Froggy, i hope your flies were delicious. You made me smile thinking of it.
Comment from DonandVicki
This is the best of these Witty, animal 5-7-5's in my opinion. It has humor and it is pun. I really enjoyed the cartoon that you posted with your poem. Well done.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2020
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This is the best of these Witty, animal 5-7-5's in my opinion. It has humor and it is pun. I really enjoyed the cartoon that you posted with your poem. Well done.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2020
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Thanks for your supportive comments!
I hope it does well in the polling.
Comment from eliz100
You have met the syllable count for the contest. It is definitely witty and about an animal. The picture adds to your few words. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2020
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You have met the syllable count for the contest. It is definitely witty and about an animal. The picture adds to your few words. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2020
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Thanks for your comments and good wishes.
Comment from Susan X Smith
This cute and humorous post is full of puns. The picture is a nice touch, also. It is an excellent contest entry, meeting the requirements. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2020
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This cute and humorous post is full of puns. The picture is a nice touch, also. It is an excellent contest entry, meeting the requirements. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2020
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Thanks for reviewing. I like your comments.
Comment from sammielwf
Under the Mistletoad...
What a great title for a not froggy at all poem. It is clear to see that this little poem just Simply"toad" the line for good writing. Well done mystery writer.
Sammielwf
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2020
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Under the Mistletoad...
What a great title for a not froggy at all poem. It is clear to see that this little poem just Simply"toad" the line for good writing. Well done mystery writer.
Sammielwf
Comment Written 08-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2020
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Thanks for your punny comments.
Comment from Mia Twysted
This piece left me with a giggle. I love the way you used the words. It was a clever play and the picture just helps bring it all to life. Something to bring a smile to someone's face.
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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2020
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This piece left me with a giggle. I love the way you used the words. It was a clever play and the picture just helps bring it all to life. Something to bring a smile to someone's face.
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Comment Written 08-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2020
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A giggle and a smile is a good review.
Comment from Anne Johnston
Love it. You have used so many descriptive words to describe this picture. I especially love your second line, "time's fun when you're having flies. Great job. Hope you win the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2020
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Love it. You have used so many descriptive words to describe this picture. I especially love your second line, "time's fun when you're having flies. Great job. Hope you win the contest.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2020
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...and I love your review! Thanks for your good wishes.
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You are welcome
Comment from royowen
This is a fabulous entry in this 5/7/5 poetry contest. Just love the word play, that gives a great dimension to your poem, and a marvellous work and chance, good luck, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2020
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This is a fabulous entry in this 5/7/5 poetry contest. Just love the word play, that gives a great dimension to your poem, and a marvellous work and chance, good luck, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 08-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2020
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Thanks for your enthusiastic and supportive response to my poem Roy.
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My pleasure
