Comment from AJ McCall

Exceptional

I am definitely taking notes from this chapter. All the couples... you described perfectly and it didn't bore me at all! I loved how one mystery is solved and then two more have to be closed. The Covenant is like a big family of wolf people who can look like humans, lol. I'll be looking for the next chapter scongrove!

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2020

Thank you, AJ :)

So thrilled you enjoyed this one. I do love a murder mystery and this is fun creating. My Breedline family is definitely getting bigger. I have to keep notes so I can remember who's who. LOL!

Thanks again and have a safe weekend!
Sincerely,
Shana :)

reply by AJ McCall on 12-Dec-2020

You're welcome Shana! And you too!

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This supernatural fiction chapter two speaks so expressively, interestingly the murder mystery through an orderly taletelling, backed by progressive plot development of investigation, fostered by very appropriate and realistic dialogues, ends with a curious ending; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2020

Thank you, Alcreator :)

Your feedback is very enlightning and encouraging. I appreciate you taking the time to read my chapter.

Take care!
Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from Mistydawn

Exceptional

I love how you started out with the family breakfast. The way you showed them as one happy family, joking and teasing each other. That made them seem more realistic, relatable. I think it's sweet that everyone wants to help the mother and child out. I'm sure Jena has a special bond with them. Your chapter is very well-written, interesting start to finish, no surprise there. I look forward to reading more.

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2020

Thanks so much, Mistydawn :)

So glad you enjoyed the family scenes. I do love getting my characters together, especially all the babies. I think you'll really enjoy the next one coming. It will be heartfelt for sure.

I appreciate your support and encouraging words.
Hugs,
Shana :)

Comment from royowen

Exceptional

I enjoyed this most comfortable episode, with most of the covenant featuring, I don't know how many years I've been reading your outstanding work, but it's been a great journey, I've got to know your heart, this is a marvellous insight to your sense of the "wild side" under control, civilised wolves, if you like, using their gifts to carry out justice. Well done, great episode, dear girl, blessings Roy
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 Comment Written 08-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2020

Thank you, dear friend :)

So happy you enjoyed this one. I do have fun bringing all the Breedline characters together as a family, especially the babies. You're always a great support to my writing and so helpful. I appreciate you!

Always your fan,
Shana :)

reply by royowen on 10-Dec-2020

Well done friend Shana

Comment from fm wright

Exceptional

First off, the pictures you chose are outstanding. Secondly, I enjoyed the read, which was uninterrupted by any mistakes that I saw. I also like how the story is progressing. Good job.

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2020

Thank you, Faye :)

So glad you liked the photos. I try to find something that will grab the readers attention. And I'm happy you enjoyed the chapter. I had fun bringing all my Breedline characters together, especially the babies. I do appreciate your support! You make a difference.

Stay safe my friend!
Hugs,
Shana :)

reply by fm wright on 10-Dec-2020

Thank you, Shana. I am truly enjoying this series. Look forward to learning more abut the characters, especially the young ones. May you also stay safe.
Hugs,
Faye