Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)

Excellent

It was nice in this chapter to see the character and role of Piglette to be more cearly defined. Revealing the name changes also suddenly brought things together to an appreciable extent.

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020

Thank you, Katherine

Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock

Excellent

Kontroz is a fountain of information and is bent on passing that to Bull.
When Piglet appears there is a shift in the air and Manny starts assembling this strange device. The explanation of what it is and what it can do sounds like a threat and he presses the button. We are in the dark until the next chapter.

Ralf

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2020

At this point, Manuel's revealing quite a bit to Bull, which puts the inspector?s life in peril. The frequency emitter is creating a spectrum of signals to trip any possible subconscious mind triggers.

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

That was quite a cliff-hanger ending there, Bill. What will happen now he's pressed his buzzer? I have another chapter waiting!! I think Piglette is in for a big surprise. I'm hoping Bull will be okay, I like him. So, time for me to check it out. Another excellent chapter. :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2020

Thanks, Sandra. Hope his batteries are charged.

Comment from Jasmine Girl

Excellent

I enjoy reading this novel and will continue reading in the future. It is humorous and has a science fiction element of mind control that sounds very interesting.

Keep posting, please.

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2020

Thank you, Lisa.

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

What a story. I guess I need to read more to learn who got eliminated that time. Is anyone safe. It seems they are taking ordinary people an programing them to kill, but I'm not sure who the good guys are or if there are good guys.

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2020

Good guys? Well, the best I can do is antiheroes.

Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

I wondered what Konitz was doing. I can't wait to see what happens now the button has been pushed. Very nice job. Can't wait to read the next installment. Keep'em coming.

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2020

Thanks, Earl. I'll pop it out tomorrow.

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Oh dear, what will happen now? I'm trying to keep all the threads together and I will be getting there. I really liked this chapter, Bill. The interaction is very good. Looking forward to what's next. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2020

Thanks, Ulla

Comment from Suzanna Ray

Excellent

Dear Bill, You described this story as a bag of pretzels. For me it's more like a great big bowl of spaghetti ! It's got more twists and turns and strands in it, than I can keep track of.
One thing I can be sure of. Your next chapter will probably have a one or more, dead bodies !

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2020

Here comes the sauce.

Comment from Mistydawn

Excellent

Detective Piglette should've kept his trap shut. Now there's hell to pay. Your story is well-written, very interesting. Your characters and their dialogue seem realistic. I look forward to reading more.

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2020

Thank you, MD

Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.

Excellent

I continue to be mesmerized by this intriguing story. It like nothing I have ever read. The characters sound so real and natural as they speak. Wonderful!

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2020

You are very kind, TT. Thank you.