Tears to Cheers
(1-9-1) Turning troubles to triumphs...16 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 1-9-1, Tears to Cheers, has the right set up and reminds the readers that all challenges begin with some level of fear, and end with wisdom, pride, and a sometimes silent cheer.
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This 1-9-1, Tears to Cheers, has the right set up and reminds the readers that all challenges begin with some level of fear, and end with wisdom, pride, and a sometimes silent cheer.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2020
Comment from Ann Market
I love this poem! It has such wonderful meaning too. I really liked your form, and the words you chose to use!
Good luck to you in the contest!
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2020
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I love this poem! It has such wonderful meaning too. I really liked your form, and the words you chose to use!
Good luck to you in the contest!
Comment Written 07-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2020
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Thanks for your enthusiastic response to my poem!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Nice entry for the
1-9-1 Poem writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. I like the presentation too.
You have a very positive message.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2020
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Hello, anonymous,
Nice entry for the
1-9-1 Poem writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. I like the presentation too.
You have a very positive message.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2020
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Thanks for your good wishes!
Comment from equestrik
This is a good and positive write for the 1-9-1 contest. I like the quote to affecively add to the message here. Very nicely done and best of luck to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2020
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This is a good and positive write for the 1-9-1 contest. I like the quote to affecively add to the message here. Very nicely done and best of luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2020
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Thanks for this lovely review!
Comment from Cynthia Adams1
This quote by Sharma is a wonderful one. I think I've heard it before and liked it a lot but didn't know who wrote it.
Tears and Cheers are good words for the first and third lines and I like that they rhyme.
Tears to Cheers is also a nice, upbeat title.
It's the kind of poem that makes me smile, and that is no small thing in the world today.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2020
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This quote by Sharma is a wonderful one. I think I've heard it before and liked it a lot but didn't know who wrote it.
Tears and Cheers are good words for the first and third lines and I like that they rhyme.
Tears to Cheers is also a nice, upbeat title.
It's the kind of poem that makes me smile, and that is no small thing in the world today.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2020
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I'm so pleased my poem was a smile-bringer.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your rhyming 1-9-1 is excellent--creative, descriptive, and uplifting.
Fears are as widely varied as the people affected by them. Unfaced fears
can paralyze people, making a completely normal life impossible.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2020
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Your rhyming 1-9-1 is excellent--creative, descriptive, and uplifting.
Fears are as widely varied as the people affected by them. Unfaced fears
can paralyze people, making a completely normal life impossible.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2020
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Thanks for your review. Being fearful is so inhibiting. Overcoming our fears is often too hard for some. Strength could be gained from heeding this Biblical message: "Fear not, for I am with you..." Most people are facing their fears alone, so this could help a lot to know there is assistance at hand.
Comment from royowen
Yes it's difficult to pull oneself up by the bootstraps, but that's the only way to survive with many of the disheartening signs in our community at the moment, great entry in this 1/9/1 poetry contest, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2020
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Yes it's difficult to pull oneself up by the bootstraps, but that's the only way to survive with many of the disheartening signs in our community at the moment, great entry in this 1/9/1 poetry contest, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 07-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2020
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Thanks, Roy. We need bravery and faith even more these days.
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We do indeed.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
I absolutely love this poem. Great 1-9-1 poem for the contest entry. These words are so true I joined fanstory in February and never got the courage to submit a poem until August. Now I love fan story and I write and submit all the time. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2020
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I absolutely love this poem. Great 1-9-1 poem for the contest entry. These words are so true I joined fanstory in February and never got the courage to submit a poem until August. Now I love fan story and I write and submit all the time. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2020
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I really appreciate that you saw worth in my poem. i'm so pleased you gained courage to post your writing. FanStory is a good site to develop and grow as a write, as you are obviously finding too.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 1-9-1 poem about the courage to conquer our fears and tackle every challenge coming our way. Nothing can stand against bravery and faith.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2020
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A very well-written 1-9-1 poem about the courage to conquer our fears and tackle every challenge coming our way. Nothing can stand against bravery and faith.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2020
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You are right about bravery and faith... they are inseparable; we sometimes need bravery to have faith, and faith to have bravery.
Comment from Bloomer Burbs
Hi mystery writer
An excellent entry for the competition. The rhyming adds gravitas to your 1 - 9 - 1 poem.
I think this do very well but you never know, eh?
Take care ands stay safe, Pete
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2020
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Hi mystery writer
An excellent entry for the competition. The rhyming adds gravitas to your 1 - 9 - 1 poem.
I think this do very well but you never know, eh?
Take care ands stay safe, Pete
Comment Written 07-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2020
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Thanks for your positive response to my poem. Those contests are all pot luck.
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Ain't that the truth.
