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Light a Candle

Light a candle for your lost ones.

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Comment from aryr
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Good luck with the contest Kace. I am really acquainted with the concept you added to your notes. I enjoyed your short dribble as it encouraged the living to light a candle to attract those spirits home and then allow them to cross over during samhain. Well done.

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 05-Dec-2020
    Hello my friend, Thanks so much for your kind review. Without hope and faith, there is only the void. Blessings, Kay XX
reply by aryr on 06-Dec-2020
    You are very welcome and your reply was so true, one needs hope and faith.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2020
    Thank you my friend. Deaths, so many in America and the World, no wonder the spirits wander. Blessings, Kay XX
reply by aryr on 07-Dec-2020
    So true my friend, so true, blessings.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
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Hello Kace, glad I had a six left - it's yours, you deserve it. Lovely to read a good upbeat message, full of hope. 'So much grief and sorrow, we need a new tomorrow' - lovely! I'll light a candle and think of you. Love Dorothy xx

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 05-Dec-2020
    Hello Dorothy in the snow! I think the legend started in UK when families lit candles for their seafaring men. Bless you my friend. Love, Kay XX
Comment from June Sargent
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We do so need a change of direction here for the new year. So much sadness has overtaken us this year. Let's hold onto our anchor - our hope and our faith. Thank you for sharing your kind thoughts.

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 05-Dec-2020
    Hello June, Thanks so much for reading, yes we must have faith and hope in the Lord, only He can sort this out. Blessings, Kay XX
Comment from Wendy G
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A lovely poem, yet sad , but beautifully written. It is accompanied by a beautiful image, perfectly suited to the theme. Best wishes for the Dribble Flash Fiction contest.

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 05-Dec-2020
    Hello new friend Wendy, Thanks so much for reading. We must have hope and faith this will pass. Blessings, Kay XX
Comment from djsaxon
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Heartwarming poetic write. My mother always kept a candle burning in the window when my brother was fighting in Vietnam. Thankfully he was there to blow it out when he came home unharmed after 12 months OS - DJ

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 Comment Written 05-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 05-Dec-2020
    Hello DJ, Thanks so much for reading, glad you enjoyed. We need a guiding light so the lost can pass over. Blessings, Kay XX