Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

Wow! This is so romantic, Melissa, and evokes the most wonderful imagery. Every breath, so sweet! It reminds me of the scent of a baby's head, or a puppy's breath too !

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020

Thank you Dawn.

Melissa

Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Ciao poet !

you have your first vote!

Your word choice ...feathers ....won me over ..

I know the feeling of a feather caressing my skin..

it makes chills go down my spine but in a positive way ... its an electrifying sensation

I like you associated this sensorial effect with the scent of a lover's breath ..

I imagine a lover cause your artwork depicts a red heart with a swooshing effect around it which so artfully recalls the scented breath your poems talks about.

A very graceful entry!

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2020

Thank you sweet Franca for the lovely review for this poem. I am glad you liked it. It finished second and I was happy others enjoyed it too. Hugs, my friend.

Melissa

Comment from LeftHandedScribe

Excellent

"Feathers across me" is such a strong and relatable image. The lightness of a feather can become something quite powerful when in the presence of that special someone.

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2020

Thank you Shauna!

Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

Hello Mystery Writer!
So true!
Our sense of scent is so strong. At least it is for me!
Your well-crafted poem resonates with me deeply.
Creative!
Best Wishes!

diane

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2020

Thank you Diane.